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by Aya

schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Again, wonderful stories! I'm glad Rel and Mik and Paw got together again. Looking forward to your new stories!
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Una's pretty perceptive. So what are they gonna do now, since the buildings are going to collapse and all technology is destroyed?
person Avernion
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I just can't agree with Una. Sex without love hurts. Sex needs love to be complete. Sex without love cripples. There are few things that can injure a persona so much as loveless sex can. In fact, it can even reach the point where it in fact rapes the soul.
As for me, if my boyfriend had sex with someone else, no matter what greater good the reason was, I would break up with him. I would never let him touch me again, because sex is not just two bodies being thrust together. I think it's strange Una can't see that.

One a side note. Rel just ended the world, thus causing a great number of people to die. What are his feelings about that? I’ve also been wondering this for quite some time. Is these stories based on your own view of the world or was it just something fun to write about? I wonder because there are so much ethic views and values about both normal life and the world mixed in.
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aftermath. I think that's a title that may work for the story that you thought about after Partners and Sequel ends. I really, really want to read it and I think it's a good idea. This story will have more Una in it, I think, since Una doesn't get much screen time. XD Plus, I think it'd be interesting to see how Una's like after being asleep for so long. Will he be live life like he always had, like in Namesake, or will Una change when he meets this person(that is crying cause of the shift in tech to tech not working anymore.)
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 110. OOOOO Una noticed something that I didn't and now it totally makes sense why Raya was playing a game with Rel with their bots.
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, I can feel Rel's pain. I'm surprised he didn't jump on them to try and separate them! But I was confused about what Una said about there being only two gay people in the troupe: Muan and Rel. What about Souse? Koln, Taln? Well, Souse goes both ways, but still....or are they in another troupe?
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Twins! How sweet! I love the way Mari spoke to her son; I should try that on my youngest; haha. I am confused tho: I thought Mari didn't have any other kids....
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WHAT???? WTF just happened??????? Why did he want to do this again?
person kaylez24
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
To quote a very funny comedian.
"IT'S THE MOTHERF@*#KING APOCOLASPE!"
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 90. Boy did I miss a lot of stuff. Hehehe, cookies. Ah, I love Ashun more and more as I get to know her. ROFL. Poor Rel stuck with a hard on and not sure what to do with it. And cookies will make it better? At least that's what I think Ashun was trying to get at.