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by Aya

schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 51. Simply put, sensually erotic.
person Shoezies
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow....this was cute in a sense...I feel bad for Rel and his panic attacks...that's not cool....At least Muan was there to help him through it all! Great chapter, as per usual!
person Loves to laugh
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, what a way to deal with panic attacks, you go Muan! :D
person Suryallee
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope you are ok?
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahahahaha~ Oh I love how Rel and Mik interact with each other. Oh the two sounds like they'll be making a strong bond of friendship if not anything more. I wonder if Muan and Paw are the sharing type even though Mik te Paw and Muan te Rel. Was that right?
person Shoezies
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, that was me who said Mik was a judgmental jerk in Partners....I guess I kinda forgot that he's like that and can't help it...I wasn't being any better than he was....Anyway, back to reviewing this...Holy freaking crap, Muan is nuts! Taking down Souse like that....I didn't think it was possible with Souse being so strong and whatnot...and poor Rel, terrified to get close to people (at least that's my take on him)....Sorry I didn't review sooner!
~~Shoezies or Shoe aka Tichele
person Avernion
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter made me laugh a lot =^^=
person Suryallee
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Uh Oh...pissing contest or what?
person Loves to laugh
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I love so much of it but Muan getting all "Macho" with Souse and letting him know who Rel belongs to was great. I also liked when Muan downed Hohi and put his foot on his chest and looked to Rel.

Mik is being a bit of a booger, but you got to love him. And Rel better be careful because he will have two very angry Sidle on his hands if either Muan or Paw notice. :D
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I can't believe Rel told Mik to go fuck himself! Brave, isn't he?

I noticed Paw's speech to Rel; why is it that Paw was speaking like when he first learned English? Or "people" speak. He wasn't talking fluently like he has been in the past 20 chapters (of both stories). Anyway, just something I noticed.