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person kayez
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ashun reaction to Mik is a bit odd. Is it some suggestion planted by Paw? Or could it be that Mik has a higher purpose in the scheme of things, like Rel?
Perhaps Mik is another game piece in a very large game?
person Shoezies
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I want a spring that makes chocolate milk at all times.....that'd be the freaking best....

Powers are....interesting yet scary in a way....Which brings up a question for me....I'll go post it in the forum....
person Shoezies
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is Rel a reincarnation of Ayato or something?! His world...it seems like Ayato and Rava....Gahhh...Rel's mind and way of thinking when he's drugged makes my head hurt....
person kayez
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Rel, he acts so pessimistic and tired with life, then something happens to him and he gets so shocked.

He also seems really frail. I fell like Muan will be caring for him not the other way around.
person Shoezies
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Rel fainted...wow...Didn't he know that he had powers? I mean, his father knew....and he knew to push him away with his mind...I thought it'd be a dead give away....

Nave's partner has some amazing powers....those are really nifty
person sapphire2619
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg awesomeness lol ...well that's one way to teach foreplay ^-^
person kayez
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just the idea of the sidhe sitting around critiquing porn is hilarious.

Muan and Ashun seem to be stunned by the differences of their knowledge of sex and what was portrayed.
Ashun was raped right? That explains her reaction. My guess that Muan was also molested.
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, this was hysterical!!! I'm picturing all these Sidhe crowded in front of the tv, trying to see every movement, every angle! So funny! Great chapter! Like they've never "seen" it before!
person js
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lol...I liked Muan's reaction to the television.
person Shoezies
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It seems like whenever Muan touches a remote, he manages to find porn! haha

Rel likes porn? I didn't think he'd like any of it....even the soft stuff....And Ashun has never seen anything sexual? isn't she mated (paired) with Osht and Raoh? And the thought of her covered in glitter is kinda funny.....

Muan sings....that's cool! and he picks up fast....even better....and his last little comment made me giggle out loud! Which earned a few strange looks from my friend who's staying for the weekend....