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February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You're right, I really enjoyed this chapter. :)
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February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, good for Rel to show a backbone and kick his father out! And good for Muan and the rest of the Sidhe for standing up to Rel's father to try and protect Rel.
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February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ROFL! I totally missed tons of your updates and am catching up. On chapter 54 right now and this chapter is hilarious. -drum roll- Who will Rel get to have his sex ed from?
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February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 55. Hehe. Your first paragraph had Violet instead of Ashun. And this chapter was really cute.
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February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 56. I noticed that you wrote Violet again in this chapter. I'm wondering if you did that intentionally or by accident. But I'm assuming you did it accidentially due to chapter 55's note. Well, here's the sentence that had "Violet" in it.
Violet eyes blinked once. Twice, before they snapped open in a shocked look, “oh.”
And here's the one I found in Chapter 57.
Violet eyes turned dark and Ashun blinked at Rel before she turned away, “no reason.”
Chapter 58. Well, sex ed for the Sidhe comes in various formats and Rel is very detail oriented to (going to chapter 59) catch that Raoh and Osht were satisfying each others needs while Ashun was kept out of the loop. Very hilarious how the two got busted by Rel with Ashun running after them into the restroom. And at the end of chapter 59, Rel really was silly. XD
Violet eyes blinked once. Twice, before they snapped open in a shocked look, “oh.”
And here's the one I found in Chapter 57.
Violet eyes turned dark and Ashun blinked at Rel before she turned away, “no reason.”
Chapter 58. Well, sex ed for the Sidhe comes in various formats and Rel is very detail oriented to (going to chapter 59) catch that Raoh and Osht were satisfying each others needs while Ashun was kept out of the loop. Very hilarious how the two got busted by Rel with Ashun running after them into the restroom. And at the end of chapter 59, Rel really was silly. XD
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February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 60. Rel really is silly. So is the dream Rel's talking about where the Gods took pleasure in wreaking pleasurable chaos on his body? And no "Violet" for this chapter. ^^ Woo~ Go,go,go,go! Almost caught up!
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February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 60. OMG! Is Mik the Key and that's why things are happening now so that Una wakes up from his sleep? Is Galt one of the game pieces and that even though the gods are supposedly not actively playing the game, since Una's sleeping, they're all playing still with the Game Master not present? OMG, OMG, OMG! Wonder how Una's gonna react to all of this if it's true.
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February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Are the Sidhe aware they are being manipulated? Rel seems very aware of it.
The cameras are still in the rooms right? What are the people seeing all this drama thinking?
The cameras are still in the rooms right? What are the people seeing all this drama thinking?
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February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was somewhat confusing....But I feel very very proud of Rel for standing up to his father like that...And I'm proud of Muan too....and Ashun sounds like someone I'd never want to piss off....
Good chapter!
Good chapter!
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February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You. Are. Blowing. My. Mind. WTF *stumbles off to reread chapter 61*