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by Aya

person Suryallee
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ROFL, the last chapter had me to tears too, that was soo sweet^^
person kaylez24
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Rel and Muan are two very confused souls.
person Shoezies
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! This chapter was adorable! Rel actually misses his parents....I thought it'd take a lot longer for him to get so attached to them....I thought for sure that he'd have attachment issues....and be really....antisocial or what have you. And Muan is quite the character
person Avernion
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwww no T^T I didn't think he needed to do that anymore T^T I feel so sad for him.
person kayez
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Rel does realize that he's still got cameras on him ?
Self mutilation is like anorexia, people who feel that their world is out of control try to control the one thing they have complete dominion over. Their body.
The whole situation with his father. Having to care for Muan. The still fresh mental wounds from prison.
Rel has a lot on his plate.
person Avernion
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update! I was so curious I kept checking and checking to see if there was something more to read :3 I though they were going to do a group-thing of helping/lecturing Rel. I wonder how they knew. If they could feel his feelings or smell the blood or both or something else. Maybe the gods really have nothing to do other than squealing on Rel to the Sidhes xD Who knows.
person Shoezies
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
“Should let him eat what he wants, usually for the best,” Violet murmured calmly to Rel.
You called Ashun “Violet” here….
Awww…Poor Rel….I have a character who used to cut in one of my stories (not to mention friends who are idiots and do it too) The whole Muan eating glitter made me laugh…I could just imagine him choking it down….Glitter gets everywhere as it is and he goes and eats it….Man, do I love glitter….not as much as Muan…Sorry, I’m rambling….I blame sickness and exhaustion….on to the next chapter….
person Shoezies
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
No, you aren’t the only one hoping that he’ll realize what makes people purr like kittens haha
I really just wanna hug Rel and yet hit him all at the same freaking time….If I could, I’d totally do both and then run in the other direction to avoid being torn to shreds by either Muan or Rel’s parents….Gods help me if they ever caught me

Wonderful chapter and I hope you update soon and certainly hope that you’re feeling better
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Muan seems to be getting sweeter and sweeter all the time! He just wants to take care of Rel; Rel should feel lucky.
person kayez
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay is it just me or is Muan digesting strange things and 'processing' them inside his body?
Is that how his people lived so long while disgesting metal shards?