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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
“Good. Because right there. You were sounding like Paw, and it was creeping me out.”
Laughs herself silly
Laughs herself silly
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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First, I think you posted the Threats chapter in Sequel by mistake?
Second, who the HELL is Raya!? How the freak do they know about Lel's secret world (yes, I'm referring to him as Lel now....)
The plot thickens and thickens....Great chapters, both of them!
Second, who the HELL is Raya!? How the freak do they know about Lel's secret world (yes, I'm referring to him as Lel now....)
The plot thickens and thickens....Great chapters, both of them!
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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so confused trying to follow two stories. :( And I think I like Partners better.
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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay let me test my understanding of this chapter.
Ashun works for the gods, she's a player in the game.
Muan also is a player.
Rel is in the process of becoming Lel. What he could be with his power and his issues handled.
Now what I'm not getting here.
Who wants to change Rel? Muan or the gods. Why does Muan want Rel to change so badly? Other than the good it will do him psychologically.
And who wants to dominate him?
Ashun works for the gods, she's a player in the game.
Muan also is a player.
Rel is in the process of becoming Lel. What he could be with his power and his issues handled.
Now what I'm not getting here.
Who wants to change Rel? Muan or the gods. Why does Muan want Rel to change so badly? Other than the good it will do him psychologically.
And who wants to dominate him?
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think in his own way Rel loves Muan. And I think Muan also loves Rel. I definitely think Muan loves Rel. Look at all the times Muan has helped Rel, been so sweet to Rel, comforting him, etc. No, he definitely loves Rel.
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Rel loves Muan...he's a blind fool if he doesn't realize that....Chapter 67 was a tear jerker...Definitely....Good work!
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've noticed in the chapters involving Ashun, that she had a crush on Mik. When did this happen? I've read partners and Mik has no real intereaction with her. So when did the crush develop?
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha Osht told Rel how to cheat, that's a hoot! I found it particularly funny when Ashun just barged in on them in the tub...and was a little put off when she complained that Mik won't bathe with her....Then I laughed a bit, ok a lot! Great chapter! (Actually the last two have been great--much like the rest of them--but this place was mean and wouldn't let me post a review....mean thing)
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha Osht told Rel how to cheat, that's a hoot! I found it particularly funny when Ashun just barged in on them in the tub...and was a little put off when she complained that Mik won't bathe with her....Then I laughed a bit, ok a lot! Great chapter! (Actually the last two have been great--much like the rest of them--but this place was mean and wouldn't let me post a review....mean thing)
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay for answering questions! And I agree that Koln should have said yes....I like Rel's view on submission and love....Great chapter! Nice read for me right before bed!