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Heard of Breaking Benjamin, never saw them. Ben is cute! GREAT fucking chapter: I was in tears thru out it b/c it was so angsty and my heart was breaking for both of them! When Lucas left David's I was like NOOOOOOO come back!!!!!!! Maybe I'm just a pathetic sap, but I would have been crying the whole time I was there. If I hadn't seen the person I loved most in this world for 13 yrs., never having moved on, always loving him, I would have been in tears the entire time.

EXCELLENT chapter! God, I can't wait till David and Deacon meet! And Jeez, Anna, it'd serve her meddling ass right if Patrick DID get together w/Deacon! lol

I feel giddy. I didn't think you could outdo the chapter before this one. Thirteen years is a long time and people do change. But I don't think love changes all that much. Especially the love David and Lucas have for each other. Anna needs to get a life finally. Or just disappear. She really is nuts. Wouldn't it be funny if Lucas and David ran away together to France. A little too fantastic..

Hmmm...I don't know what to think about this little reunion. As you are well aware, I am not a huge David fan. But I love Lucas, so if he wants to hook back up with David, I say go for it. I can't wait though to see him tell David about his son and about gettin makey outey with his son. Ha! That won't be awkward.

Such a sad chapter. Gotta love it. Sorry to hear you've been having a bad time of it lately. Hope things will get better and thanx for continuing this story. I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Wow, a few weeks of not writing and then you come up with this awesome chapter! You have some very real talent. I very much hope you manage to work your skills at writing in your everyday life. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, but take your time if you need it. I'll be checking for updates.

OMFG!!!!!! I'm only halfway thru the chapter but I have to go to the bus stop! Shit!!!! And just when David opened the door! Oh, thank God Lucas found him, OMG, I hope they will work everything out. Damn Anna, god I hate her; telling David those lies!!!! Shit! OMG, I'm soooooo glad you updated this story first!

Shit, I gotta go, god forbid the kid actually walks up the street to the house, right???

I'll finish reviewing later, if he lets me back on MY computer! LOL


And btw: I'm glad you're back Exer! I've missed you!

FUCK!!! I did a lengthy review and it didn't take! Ok, Reader's Digest version: Grrrr, the fucking bus was late! The bus driver forgot today was half a day! Anyway, finished the chapter and OMG, what a GREAT chapter!!!!!! Oh please, please, please tell me that Lucas and David will work things out.....I can't believe Lucas just showed up at his door! OMG, I can't wait to read the next chapter! What a total bitch Anna was, kind of two-timing (I'm not sure if that's the right word) the both of them!

Anyway, awesome chapter! I'm glad you updated this story first, I think it's my favorite of yours. Funny, b/c I really don't like angsty stories! But your writing is so fantastic, I overlook all the angst!

Hope things are better with you and I anxiously await the next installment!

This review better go thru, b/c if I have to rewrite all this AGAIN, I'm gonna flip!

WOW Exer, boy am I happy you started updating this story again because I haven't noticed it before.
ANd I'm so in love with it now.
Love the mystery,characters, everything.
I hope you meant you were going to continue writting new chapters and replace the old ones as you go further with the story because it would kill me if you just swiped the entire story and started updating from scratch.
Because I can't find anything so wrong with what you've written so far and I'm scared you're going to change the "feel" of the story entirely.
I like Deacon's apartment and his lines so far.
Am in love in artsy Lucas and can't wait to read more about the theater.
Also the appearance of the father and son, as does Lucas's, has me drooooling miiiiles away from my home.
I lie that Deacon stay true to his character and tried to ... with Lucas, and that they stopped on time.
Because Lucas and David thing is to good to be changed.
And I absolutely adore ch 7 and will personally execute you if you do not deliver ch 8 soon;PPP

Pretty please with a cherry on top for you to put ch 8 soon.
*big eyes*

Hmm... okay... I read all of the stories you've posted and I must say I am a fan of your stories and characters, especially Lucas. He reminds me of one of my characters Raven, unposted on Aff as of yet.I was suprised when you referenced Wraeththu it is one of my favorite series and I actually didn't know Storm Constantine had written anything else, but now I must find!!! Do keep writing and updating, the rewrite is a wonderful thing, I have to do that periodically with my stories. Check out mine if you will. Well I must sleep now so tata for now.
Asyen

Finally they meet and it was everything I had hoped for. Only thing missing was the lost son revelation but I assume that is next.