rate_review Reviews

This story is really good, I wish you had finished it but I don't hate the ending that I believe that you would have written even if it is a bit scandalous. I never really review stories but yours is really well written, especially since it isn't a story that is based on something else. Maybe one day you'll write again, but what you have written I have truly enjoyed.

Damn it. I think I hate Anna too!
They don't deserve this! but then again thats part of the story...
oh and I just wanted to say...
THIS IS AMAZING!! I really like the story and the build up no matter how bad it is for my heart since you put them through so much agony I feel terrible too! I just wish they'd somehow manage to get out of it in one piece.
I love Lucas!! dear awesome author- yes I'm buttering you up for an update- please update sooon~~
Oh and I'm gonna disregard my subtlety and ask if Lucas is going to be the dominant one in their relationship? cuz I really like it when David takes control... but maybe it's just my fetish talking... since I'm very fond of submissive geeks...

Chapter 1. Woo~ Not what I expected when I thought that Anna and Lucas might get married. Thirteen years. -whistles- That's a long time. I'm thinking that maybe it was David that went and got married and the twins are his kids. I'm bouncing from excitement, I must know!

Chapter 2. Aw~ So cute that Deacon and Jonny are love birds and Lucas with Anna just happen to move right into the town that David's son was adopted. Poor Lucas trying not to be cute while he tried not to cry for dropping his wallet with his, David and Anna's picture. And my guess was wrong again. David went solo and made a name for himself while devious Anna kept in touch with him.

Wooo~ Chapter 3. Dang Deacon really got Lucas there with the surprise. And for some reason Lucas didn't catch onto what Deacon said about finding David online through Lucas even though they haven't been in contact for years.

Boy do Jonny and Deacon have a kink. And I thought Lucas and David had a weird one. Love the variation of it though. Now when will those two stubborn grown adults get back together to right themselves up?

Bwhahahahahahahaha! Chapter 4. I'm loving Deacon more and more. A spunky little fellow with a spitfire to burn down the whole forest. No wonder he's David's son.

Chapter 5. First off, thank so much for the reference of those books! I'm definitely going to get those to read. Keep the boredom away while I'm at work.

Wow. I must say that things are getting spicy between Deacon and Lucas in an unusual way. I wonder what will happen between the two and if Deacon will spill the beans and settle things between him, the Archers and the twins. -drum roll- And will David and Lucas get back together or will they not? Got 3 more chapters to go so I'm hoping something will happen, for better or worse. X3

Chapter 7. Woot~ Go Deacon, go! Take down those unnecessary walls to help you get to where ya need to go! And dang, he was making his move on Lucas too. Hot and burning and what a sensual seduction on the poor drunken Lucas. I wonder how he'll break it to David that he almost banged his son. Onto chapter 8!!!

Chapter 8. Aw~ You got me jumping off the cliff hanger without a rope and now I'm waiting to read the rest of updates that you'll be making.... soon...... this week..... tomorrow, no...... today...... the desires of this reader compels you -sparkles eyes and blinks-

Damn smex interuptions. I hope that Anna is killed off pretty soon, although that may make things less interesting. And what is up with Patrick getting all involved. And what is up with Deacon. Is he coming to Columbia for David or for Lucas? I think it might be for Lucas, but I don't know why. Is it cause he wants to get smexy with Lucas again? I do t blame him. I want to get smexy with Lucas. And I love Lucas's short hair.