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for Dire Consequences

by clover71

schedule October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
person Anise
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(2) I think we would have to say that at the very least Brent's curiosity has been peaked and if he's not careful he could move right on into infatuation ;) I wonder what Josh is thinking with all this going on, he seems to be handling it better but then he already knew he was gay but he still has to be a little freaked out about what'll happen considering Brent's a co-worker and one that just got an important promotion too. The fact that they get along rather well when they want to is another thing that could either be a good or bad thing depending on how these two are able to handle it, work is definitely going to be interesting from here on out :) Another great chapter, definitely parts that had me laughing out loud again ^_^
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I actually read this a few days ago. I even immediately put it in my recommended reading list too, but somehow I managed to not review yet. Shame on me.

I loved your story. Its very well written and your characters are amazing; I am hooked already. It was very amusing to read Brent's reaction the morning after and Josh's nonchalant acceptance after, it will make every thing very interesting I am sure.

Keep up to great work and I'll read and review every update religiously from now on.
person kylee123
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter. I read the whole story again. It is hilarious. Now that Brent is lacking a girlfriend, he will really be lusting after Josh. I cant wait to see what happens next. I like the coworkers too.
person Erica
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapter. Brent is so horny for Josh. Please keep updating
person erica
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic story. Are you still working on it because I would love to read the next chapter.
person Anise
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is why it's never a good idea to drink in any situation where your coworkers are involved. Although they are being rather mature about how they're dealing with this considering Brent has a girlfriend and Joshua slept with a guy who's his rival and until that night, straight. And speaking of girlfriend I can't imagine what he's going to tell here when she sees all those marks, don't think that's going to go well at all. Really great (and interesting) start, I can't wait to see how they're able to deal with this once their back to real life and work.

Looking forward to the next chapter and I have to say that 'Fuck the living dead' is now my new favourite saying I actually laughed out loud when I read that, I like your sense of humour :)
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Josh's bluntness, I have to say. I love this so far. I can't wait to see where Brent and Josh's relationship goes.
person vicxn
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, i like this. I like how Brent isnt disgusted about sleeping with another man even though he is straight. Update soon x
person kylee123
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very funny and sexy story. I love it. I like Josh and Brent too. I am looking forward to reading more.