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Begging for an update Making puppy eyes. Please?

OMG! I love all the new developments in the story. I am so happy to hear that Sakura and Kei are off living happily somewhere with their other children. I am also excited to see how the meeting between Mayuri and Xavier will go. I love Soriya. He is so sweet and innocent. Nick does not realize that he already loves Soriya and that he is hurting Soriya by talking about Lucian. I love the plot so far. Most important - is there really someone impersonating Julie/ Who could it be? I cant wait to read the next chapter.

I didn't realize that you started a new story. I'm curious if Julie is alive or dead. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Yikes! Poor Julie. if only her parents and Lucian knew how badly Silver was treating her. I wonder if she will survive the imprisonment. It is too bad that Jeremy and Tristan did not have a good first time. Tristan is a bastard but Silver is ten times worse for treating his own sister in law and the daughter of his nephew so roughly when he is treating Lucian so well. How will Lucian ever forgive him. I am eager to see what happens with Nick and Soriya

You have a great plot idea but you really need a beta. I noticed a lot of spelling errors and run ons. Also give more detail it all seems like everything is in a big hurry. Also with more detail your chapters are longer and the reader can picture everyhing better in their mind. Great effort and plot. Just go back take the time and really read through it.

-Blair

This story is so good. Silver has beat Derek in the "cruel bastard" department. He is a woman hater. How can he be so mean to Lucian's own twin sister. That is not the way to treat your in-laws. There is going to be hell to pay once Lucian finds out the truth. I am glad to see Nick and Soriya getting so close. i am eager to see what will happen with Tristan and Jeremy. Thanks for the great story. I am really enjoying it.

Chapter 2 was great and overflowing witrh cuteness. I am glad that Silver made Lucian happy in bed. Very nice and hot love scene. Too bad Silver is such a bastard out of bed. Nick and Soriya are just too cute together. I cant wait till Nick realizes that Soriya was the little red sparrow. Jeremy and tristan are hilarious together. it sounds like they are going to have a great adventure. I am eager to read more.

I love the new story. I seems Nick was in love with Lucian - so sweet but now Lucian has been stolen away by Silver. Poor Nick is going to get his heart broken. The person holding Julie really is a bastard. Maybe even worse than Derek. I am glad you are back. I missed your stories.