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I was glad to see an new chapter up I have missed this story.
But was sorry to read of about your uncle, I pray that you and your family will be comforted in knowing that others are sorry for your loss even if we only know you by your stories.

This was the most traumatic chapter ever. I could not bear the rape of Lucian It made me sad all day (I was reading this at lunchtime). It made me lose hope for a happy ending. I feel like there is no way for Achariya to ever redeem himself now. To rape a pregnant man when Solika is at home. Truly horrible. He deserves a horrible death. I can't even think about Amara for stealing the beautiful Lucian and treating him so badly. I am sorry for Solika because his child will have such a horrible father.

Thanks for the new chapter. The story is sad but I am really loving it. I am somewhat comforted to know that Jeremy will be born to Lucian but I am still heartbroken for Darien and Alex. Jeremy was always so sweet and innocent. It is too sad. I hope Soriya will get stronger now that he knows Nick is not completely dead. Amara is insane. How selfish to want forgiveness and try to ruin Lucian's happy life again. The story is beautiful. I love it. The story line is one of my favorite at AFF. I wonder what the evil Achariya is up to.

I think it is wonderful that kei and Sakura arestill having babies. That makes me so happy. It is also awesome that Lucian and Silver are having another baby. I hope Lucian will not be harmed by the insane Amara. he really is crazy to steal Lucian away from his baby. Little Soriya just breaks my heart. He has suffered so much and now he is all alone without Nick. It is very sad. I hope that Soriya and Nick can be together again with their baby. I am still crying over Jeremy and Tristan! I am also eager to find out the details of Achariya and Kay's family history. Thanks for the new chapter. I really love this story.

Yay for the new chapter! More sad events. Mayuri did not take long to forgive Xavier. LOL. Achariya is very, very messed up. He is definitely the most ruthless and evil bad guy ever in the series. I can't believe that Nick is gone too, even if it seems his ghost is still there. Could it be that Anita was the woman who was married to Silver before? That would be quiet something since Silver sounded like he really hated his first wife. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope Soriya and the baby will be okay. So sad. Aside from Lucian and Silver, there is sadness everywhere.

Depressed. Eyes watering. Is there no one that can save Jeremy and Tristan and their baby? Jeremy is so sweet and innocent. This chapter is a real heartbreaker.

Great new chapter. Nathan is in trouble wth Percy. So funny. I love the way Percy handles his son. I also love how good Lucian is at handling Silver. I guess since Derek is his father, he must be used to dealing with evil villians. Lucian and silver really are perfect for each other. My heart is very worried about Nick and Soriya going back to Asa. Nick does not seem to be very smart. He already let Asa force him to marry Voleak. I could'nt bear it if Soriya or his baby got hurt. Achariya gets first prize for being the number one cruel bastard in the story. He truly has a heart of stone to want to kill his own baby. I am glad that Solika and Jeremy are safe for now.

The end of Voleak? I am glad she is gone even though it was Asa who caused all the trouble in the first place. The scene with Asa chasing Kell was hilarious. Kell is really making him work hard. I am glad that Nick and Soriya are free from Voleak even though poor Soriya got hurt again. Poor Molika has also been attacked again. Nathan is behaving really badly especially after Molika was raped the first time. I wonder why Achariya is so cruel and evil? What happened to make him so selfish. I hope some one will come to rescue Solinka and Jeremy. I feel sorry for Mayuri. He is all alone and about to have a baby. So sad. I am glad that at least Seth and Daniel are happy. I hope Molika will find happiness too.

Time to pop champagne! Congratulations to Lucian and Silver and cute little baby Jade. I am very happy that the baby is safe. I just hope all the other pregnant dads will be safe too. They have been in the same town as Molika for a month and they have not found him. Poor Solika just lost all his tricks and now he is pregnant too. I hope Achariya will not be too mean to him. My heart is sad for Mayuri and his bad parting with Xavier. Xavier doesn't even know that Mayuri is pregnant ooo. I am loving this story so much. I was inspired to go back to read The Forbidden Book again. It is so good and funny! You really have a talent for telling good stories. I'cant wait to read the next chapter.

Please update this soon I love it