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for A Match Made In Heaven-completed

by sinounva

person kylee123
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was just thinking to myself that I missed your stories. Lovely chapter. Achariya does know how to make my heart hurt. How could he betray Solika like that when he was recovering from his attack? Especially after his own daughter had just been raped. The whole scene with Theara was very tragic. I hope he will be able to find happiness with Gabriel and that he will be able to fix his face. Achariya has caused so much damage to so many people. I wonder what it will take to make him change.
person kylee123
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Sakura and Kei are having another baby! Kei really is a horny beast. And Derek and Yuki too! Awesome. I am sorry for little Emma. Now Achariya knows what it is like to have someone do evil things to his innocent family. I still haven't forgiven him for raping Lucian. That was the most painful part of the story. I am very interested to see who the rapist is and why he attacked Emma. I really hope that Achariya will be good to his family and not betray them in the end. it is time for Solika to have a little happiness. Plus they are having another baby. Hurray!
person kylee123
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious chapter. Derek is the best. I can't believe that he is secretly following Jayden and Nate. Yuki does know how to distract him though. Hurray for more babies! I also love Ethan and Amery. They will make a very hot couple. I hope Jeremy and Jade will find Lucian too. So the crimson stone is in Jade and Jeremy? Those two will need a lot of protection.
person kylee123
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I thought it was hilarious that Achariya is playing the protective father role and warning Dorian away from Emma. Achariya seems to be happy to have Solika and Emma with him. I hope that helps him to be satisfied with what he has and to choose his family instead of evil. I hope Solika can finally have some happiness too. He is freely loving Achariya for the first time. Danny and Michael are so cute together. I am glad to see that Theara has found Gabriel again. I am looking forward to the next chapter and I cant wait to see what happens with Nate and Jayden.
person kylee123
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the Christmas chapter. Lucian and Seyha are so beautiful and tragic together. I was very happy that they finally made love but very sad for Lucian's pain. Lucian won't allow himself to love anyone other than Silver. That is wonderful and sad at the same time. Seyha is doing a very good job of loving Lucian. I had to laugh at Nate and Jayden. I don't think Nate is going to make it without making love to Jayden. I am happy that Anchaly and Jade got married. That was hilarious. Poor Jade is going to be the target of all kinds of bad guys if he is the carrier of the crimson stone. The story is flowing so well right now. I just love it. I am enjoying all three stories so much.
person kylee123
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was fantastic! It sparkled! My favorite scene was Solika with Achariya. Awesome! I also got a good laugh when Mayura told Lionel to get rid of his mistresses. Mayura is very capable of taking care of himself. He will have Lionel wrapped around his little finger very quickly. I also loved the new attraction between Nate and Jayden. Plus Derek threatening Jayden. Hilarious. Poor Lucian has been suffering for so long. That scene broke my heart because I understand how lost Lucian must feel without Silver and fighting his new attraction to Seyha. The story is really turning out nicely.
person kylee123
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice new chapter. That Achariya certainly has caused trouble in everyone's life. I was hoping that he and Solika would have a chance but now Solika has met Nate. I wonder who Solika really loves. I also like mayura and Lionel. Lionel was very quick to claim his mate. He did not even wait for him to wake up. My only wish is that Amara does not cause any more trouble, I don't want him to touch anyone again.
person kylee123
schedule December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter. I am so happy to see an update. Of course I am just dying for Lucian and Silver or Seyha to get back together. I am so sad for Lucian. He has been alone for so long. I can't believe the evil Amara is still around. I hope he will meet an unpleasant end. I also hope that Mayura will finally find true love. I am hoping these characters will finally find some happiness.
person kylee123
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry to hear about your uncle's passing. I am so happy that you are updating again. I like the beginning of part two to the story. It sounds very hopeful. I am sad that twenty years had to go by. Especially for Lucian and Silver. I am eager to see how everything will turn out.
person Divanora
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just wanted to say I really like your stories, I've read through this series, and I know you've mentioned that English isn't your first language, but your grammar and spelling has improved dramatically over the stories. If you ever want help with proofreading, just let me know :)
Also, a request - do you think you could possibly create a family tree? All of the uncles and cousins are starting to get really confusing! lol. The downside of have immortal or near immortal characters ;)
Can't wait to see what happens in this new story!