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Luv, luv your fics but you need a beta. I would be more then happy to beta for you.

Ps. why can't they have a moment of peace.

So sad. Poor Jade and Lucian, It is especially unfair that Amara is still around after causing Silver and Lucia to be separated for twenty years. I hope Sakura and Kei will find a way to stay together. They have already been through so much suffering. I understand that Sakura could never choose his own happiness over his son’s life. No mother would be able to do that. WAAH! I feel like Ambrose is the keeper of all the information but he is never doing anything to help his family.

Thanks for the new chapters. I missed this story so much. Amara has caused so much pain for Lucian's family. I can't believe that he is at it again. They need to get together and destroy him finally. If Yuri is Yuki's brother then he should be quite old by now. I wonder what the reason is that he still looks more like a boy and not a man?

I know you are rewriting but I really miss this story! Although my heart quakes with fear for what will happen to Sakura and Kei. Update soon please. ♡♡♡

How can a chapter be so happy and so sad at the same time! The news about Sakura and Kei made my heart drop. I had hoped that they were done suffering es[ecially after spending twenty years in Derek's crystal world. I will have to go and read the rewritten Forbidden book to catch all the changes. Also it sounds like Sakura is expecting again. I feel like bawling along with Sakura and Kei. It is too sad. I hope they will not have to be separated. I also loved the scene with Solika and Achariya. Especially when Solika tells Achariya to not cheat on him. That was quite a hilarious exchange. If Amithyda keeps feeding Emiya like that, they will be doing naughty things very soon. I can't believe that Lionel would cheat on Maruya after forcing him to marry him. What a brat! Just as Lucian and Seyha are finding happiness, the sorrow is shifting to other people. I really hate that Amara. He is the person that Silver/Seyha needs to take his revenge against. This chapter was really excellent. I hope Sakura will not have to leave. That would truly be a tragedy. I am off to read the whole chapter again.

Thanks for the note. It made me feel really appreciated. I always enjoy your stories because your storylines are very creative and hilarious at the same time. I think I am now addicted to the good uke bad seme story idea. I also admire the fact that you keep track of your characters so well through so many generations. I am really cheering for Lucian and Seyha. They deserve some happiness. I hope Lucian will really be able to save Jayden because it would be such a heartbreak if he should die. Plus it would truly be full warfare between Derek and Nate. Achariya is really getting a taste of his own medicine with Amithyda and Emiya. I am interested to see how things will work between those two. Achariya better try his best or Solika will not forgive him. Will Achariya offer himself up in exchange for his daughter/son? I can't wait to see.

Wow. This chapter was full of details. the story of Achariya made me so sad because he has caused so much harm to so many people. Tristan and Jeremy died and Lucian was raped and separated from Silver for 20 years. So heartbreaking. I also wonder what it means that Soriya's new baby was born holding a pearl. I am happy for Nick and Soriya. I wish Lucian could find out about Seyha soon. He has been suffering for so long. Lucian reminds me of my own mother who has been so faithful and loving to my dad who died ten years ago. So sad. I am excited to know that you will be rewriting the forbidden book. I really love that story. I am looking forward to seeing what you do with it. Last of all - the evil Amara is back! I could not bear it if he came close to Lucian again. I hope Seyha will slice him into a million and one pieces. ( LOL I am so violent- but Amara deserves it.) I cant wait for the next chapter.

This chapter was fabulous with so many new developments. I am very evil because I am still glad that Voleak died and I am extra glad that she did not have Nick's child. She deserved to die after she attacked Soriya. I still feel like Asa was to blame for this whole fiasco with Nick and Voleak. He should be the one to bear the punishment for all of this. Soriya is the most innocent person of all and Amery's family should not be calling him a whore. Poor Ethan is taking the punishment for everyone's past mistakes. Achariya is a crazy and greedy man. he has his family and twins on the way, and he is still moving forward with his evil plan. It makes me afraid to see what will eventually happen with him. I wonder if he will ever learn that he should choose the happiness that is right in front of him over his twisted desire to ressurect his mother. I love the story . I can't wait for the next chapter.

I am mad at Avery for hurting Ethan like that. I wa hoping he would be different from his mother and Voleak. It is too bad he can't experience being raped himself. I am happy that Jade has finally found Lucian. Jade must be so happy to see his dad smiling again. It will be wonderful when Seyha realizes that this is his long lost family. I can't wait for the truth to be revealed.

I almost died laughing when I realized that Lucian is pregnant again. He and Silver are so fertile. They would have had a hundred children by now if they had stayed together all this time. I am so glad that Theara has been rescued by Gabriel. The last chapter was so sad. I really don't know what Solika is going to do with that bastard Achariya. Achariya wins first prize for being the most evil villian ever. Lionel and Mayura make a very cute couple. I can't wait for Lucian to realize that Seyha is really the same as Silver. I am so happy that they are having another baby! Awesome!