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i have yet to read one of you stories that sis not have me getting up and reading more before running to work cus i lost track of time i love your work and even your un-betaed work is understandable ^^ i love your imagery i can picture it in my head ty so much for your writings and always looking forward to your next exciting adventure

i like the story a lot but, the spelling and grammar errors are killing me! I have the extreme urge to go through this and clean it all up for you. you need a beta. I'm sure many people would be happy to do it too, if you'd ask, hell, I'll do it! I can see where you try to use more sophisticated and old language when they speak, but then you kinda drift from that and start using more modern slang. And usually when I hear someone speaking in such a proper way they usually do not use "don't", "can't", or "we've" instead they would not abbreviate and would say 'do not', 'can not' or 'we have', sure it's a pain to have to remember not to use them when we are all so used to writing and speaking that way, but it just sounds better. please, get in contact with me or somebody else who has mentioned wanting to beta, because the story line is really good, and so is your writing style, you just REALLY need someone to look these over and fix it up a bit. I think it would really shine then.

The ending is beautiful. My heart is still sad but I had to laugh at Amithyda being stuck inside the crystal ball. I wonder if they will ever find out who the original killer of Sakura was.I am hoping that there will be happiness for Molika in the future and I wonder if this is the last of Solika and Achariya. I can't wait to see what you have planned for Kei and Sakura in the sequel. I am also eager to see how things will go for Yuri and Damien.

I think this chapter was the most sad because it had a feeling of finality to it. I am glad that Nick and Soriya are back. I would be mad at them too but I am so happy that they are alive. I am sad because Sakura and Kei died and left their baby - again. I am sad too because Achariya was put under a spell by Amithyda and did so many countless terrible things and now he and Solika have gone and left their twins as well to be taken care of by Emiya and the evil Amithyda who started all the trouble in the first place. I am sad about Solika and Achariya but I also feel a sense of peace about their dying because Achariya was such a tortured soul. He did so many bad things that it would be hard for people to ever accept him back in to their lives. Sakura and Kei just break my heart though. All I can do is hope that they will get their happy ending together eventually.

I am depressed. My heart is doubly broken. I have lost all hope. It is not fair that the bad guys should get away with all that evil. How could Achariya cause so much pain to Solika's family when he is feeling the pain of losing a loved one himself? I don't want Kei and Sakura to die and leave their children behind. I was hoping that Kei could somehow get Sakura's heart back. Achariya and Amithyda have caused so much pain to all these family members. I wish they could make it so that the two bad guys never had their disastrous first meeting. Plus now the baby has no parents. WAAH!

WAAH! I am so depressed that even my ears are drooping! How could Achariya kill the sweet innocent Sakura? How will Solika be able to live with the knowledge that his dad was killed to save him? I could feel Kei's heart break in that scene. It makes me wonder why they have been cursed to be separated so many times. The scene reminds me of the sad end of The Forbidden Book when Sakura and Kei were trapped together in Derek's amethyst crystal. The only part that cheered me up was knowing that Sakura has been reborn as the baby and Kei has promised to give him all his love. I also wonder if the baby has the same eyes as his beloved Sakura. Without Sakura, it feels as if the whole world should be in mourning. The only thing that could break my heart more was if Kei had agreed to marry whoever Ambrose chose. I think I would go insane. I am kind of mad at Ambrose right now because I feel like he is working against Sakura.

I guess hate really does make a hot couple. Amithyda and Emiya's super hot love scene made me forget all the bad things Amithyda did. Poor Emiya is doomed to love a bastard just like his father Solika. I do love the back and forth between Emiya and Amithyda.

My heart is broken after chapter 48. I missed so many updates. Life was so unfair to Soriya. It is not fair that Voleak's mother got to have her revenge on him when that awful girl would not stop stalking them. I wish I could go back and kill Voleak three times more. WAAH!

WAAH! Is Solika really gone forever? So much sadness! So many babies growing up without their parents. Poor Molika was also doomed to an unhappy life. I am interested to see how it will all play out. I forgot to include my email with the last review of the Forbiddden Book. it is 123kylee@gmail.com. I have been busy with work for the past couple weeks but we are at the end of our busy period.So now I have more time to read. Hurray! I hope there will be some happiness in the next chapter.

Five babies! We are in baby heaven. I wonder what Achariya would say if he knew that he has twin sons. I am eager to see how things will turn out for Achariya and Emiya and Amithidya. Amithidya has already caused so much pain for everyone. I love how Kei found out about Sakura's pregnancy. I am so happy for him and Sakura. This new baby will be a seme like Kei. If the family can manage to stay together. Both chapters were lovely. I hope one day you will do a family tree. It would be something to look at.