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by CandyCaner

person Shyann
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh Boy this sounds like an open marriage.
I hope she doesn't get hurt.
Can't wait for more ASAP!
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I'm really looking forward to reading more.
person Anon
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome job! its very interesting and great job with details!
person Shyann
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow please post more soon!!
person lovelyl
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the compliment now I feel I have to write more. Argh the pressure. LOL! This story may have a sad undertone but I get the feeling there is light at the end of the tunnel for poor Mia. I hope Greg does not turn out to be a total monster even if he is a cradle robber.

It is a shame you do not have anymore reviews but give it time I saw the hits and that is very good. :D

lovelyl (female, I think hang on gotta check yeah I am.) lol!
person lovelyl
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning. :D