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loved the chapter, keep up the work, even if it takes quite a while to update (:
the part about umbrella and naoya made me giggle~

Hey! Welcome back!!!! Before I start this latest chapter, I just wanted to respond to your A/N, Myth. I was only suggesting Ayumu concentrate on finding someone who would reciprocate his feelings. Not someone as unattainable as Nayoa. I actually like the pairing of these two characters together; I'm not trying to rewrite your story! :) Whoever you choose to pair up is fine w/me; your story is excellent and I would never put my two cents in, in regards to your pairings and writing. I only said that to spare poor Ayumu from the heartache I can forsee is coming. lol

Ok, gonna read the chapter now!

The baseball game was really interesting. Naoya must have been really bored watching a professional game, b/c evidently he only likes to play, not to watch! :)

And yay for Ayumu for getting better and better at pitching! Yep, Naoya better watch out! lol

Can't wait for your next update!

alright i had been dying to know how their relationship was going to change after he got caught thanks for the update

Indirect sister complex! LOL!
Ahh poor Ayumu, the object of his desire so close to him .. doubt he'll be able to sleep. I wonder if Kaji's tactic started working ....

You're quite evil Missy!

Love your story I'm not really into the whole baseball thing but it's really starting to rub off on me kind of reminds me of the anime Prince of Tennis. Anyways its been awhile since you updated so though I'd let you know Im looking forward to it and its a really great story so far.

Well, at least Naoya is talking to Ayumu again! I was really surprised to hear about Kaji wanting to hook up w/Naoya! Didn't see that one coming! lol

It was cute at the end of the chapter; I hope Naoya isn't angry w/Ayumu anymore. Personally, I think Ayumu should focus his attention on someone who will be more responsive to him. Naoya seems, (especially after he totally rejected Kaji and thought that him and Ayumu were doing "weird" things), like he would be pretty much against anything gay. It's just the feeling I got during this chapter.

Anyway, I'm glad you updated! It's funny; I was just thinking of this story yesterday!

And oh, btw: I don't want you to think I'm some perv that only reads these stories for the gay porn or something! hahahah I love the romance and angst between the characters, just like the next fangirl! lol

Ok, you made me google sounding! Ha! I hope you're happy!!! (:

Why do you water down the sex scenes? This is the adult site, right? J/K, I know there are stories on here that don't have any sex. Not that I've read them, lol.....

Poor Ayumu, it's so humilitating what happened to him. Kaji is the devil! But he is also extremely smart; the seed has been planted in Naoya's mind and now whenever Naoya sees Ayumu, he will think of him being tied up and naked. Maybe Naoya will ask Ayumu why he didn't go to HIM and ask HIM for help! Wouldn't that be a kicker! hahahha

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh my bad boy captain! I enjoy as long as it lasts ^^

...well I used extreme measures... hahaha, gotta love him! It seems Ayumu is missing the greater good of his humiliation ;p
What an entertaining chapter!

Interesting chapter. I caught up with a few chapters today. I guess Naoya will be seeing Ayumu in a new light now. I was beginning to wonder if there would ever be a relationship between Ayumu and Naoya. Of course the captains methods were quite extreme but amusing too. I am interested to see what will happen next.