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*sobs* why can't relationships ever be straight forward! ...T.T
lol
yes I am back! x3
I was going to email you too, to see if I could get the updates
via email but my email has decided to freeze on me.
So I finally got my interent up and running again and searched
for you :) just a cycle with interent freezes -.-"
Well I love the progress of this story!! I'm so please Ayumu
was finally able to get Naoya, but only to have to send him away
for the well being of his sister T.T
Wonder what's going to happen now though *big grin* maybe Naoya
will still break up with Ayumi knowig that Ayumu was lieing about
his feelings... *thinks more deeply of how the plot could turn out*
Hehehe ^^
remember to keep up with the Wicked Writing Myth ;)
until the next time you update xD
Ja Ne
xXx

It would have made things so much easier ..... but less interesting! Ahhh, the drama!!! Love "it's the nature of such things to be found out", so true. At least Naoya wants to set things right now, but little Ayumu seems a bit challenged with the situation, the hormones and his guilt ;p

More drama to be expected! And I guess a certain captain is the first to find out ..... he worked hard for it to happen after all!

Jeez, poor Ayumu. He should have thought all this thru before his little head controlled his big head. So now he knows how Naoya really feels about him and NOW he wants to protect his sister? If Naoya is saying he likes Ayumu so much more than his sister, no matter what Ayumu says, his sister's relationship w/Naoya will never be the same. What's gonna happen when she notices how distant maybe Naoya will be towards her? She's gonna find out somehow about her brother and Naoya's right; better she finds out sooner rather than later. Altho she will probably never forgive her brother. It's a tough spot for both boys to be in.

Excellent chapter! I was really surprised by Naoya's confession!

OMG FINALLY!!! please dont let it be a dream. That would just be too cruel, oh man id feel sorry for him if it was actually a dream. PLEASE update soon. I cant wait to find out what happens next between them.

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wahhh! I Love this story x3
sorry, I haven't been on here for a while. I come back to find
WP with many more chapters!! :D
you're still one of my favourite writers and I can't wait to see how
this one ends now :D
thankyou very much for the chapters
please continue your Wicked Writing! x3
xMoonlitx

What an interesting turn of events! Now Ayumu's clumsiness somehow led him to the fullfilment of all his wet dreams. And now .... drama ensures! Poor big sis, your boyfriend got stolen by your little brother.

O.O
Ayumu..... so naughty

Wow! All I can say is wow! At first, I thought Ayumu saying they should save time and shower together was out of character. But then, w/Naoya kissing Ayumu, THAT was out of character! But somehow it worked! Boy can you write a lemon! hahaha, But I remember your great scenes from Tokoyo Boys! lol

Yes, I can see Ayumu pinching himself to make sure this wasn't another one of his wet dreams! lol

Great chapter; I can't wait to find out how they're going to react to one another now. Thx. for the quick update!

I read every chapter and liked it but since I signed in like only two weeks ago I didn't review. Especially the insight in Japanese society is very intresting. One chapter a day? Yay!

ahhhh, you love to torture little Ayumu! The umbrella scene is cute, Naoya so decidley refusing ......