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September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn it Ayumu is too stubborn for his own good. Can't he see that sooner or later Naoya will leave his sister, he is obviously no longer hold any romantic feeling for her. No matter what, Naoya will eventually break up her at the end. It would be better for her to know sooner rather than latter. I just took my physiology exam and I'm death tired :(, but after reading this chapter I'm feeling a lot better:) Thank you for the wonderful story. Any way can't wait for the next installment :)
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September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, spending time with Naoya sure is educating .... No use fighting against the romantic feelings, they'll get you anyway!
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September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How crazy is it that sex is fine but kissing is a no no !! Arghhhhhhhh teenagers man! I wana shake Ayumu so bad :S
I hope that ultimately he's not disowned by his family coz he really is trying bless him (in a misguided way, but still trying)
naoya can behave like an ass, his sister will break up with him, and after enough time they can both come out. But Reading your Tokyo boys, it won't be that simple lol. Ultimately tho, when they finally do kiss it'll be the end of the pretense for both.
Ps I had a feeling you weren't gonna carry on with that scene :'(
I hope that ultimately he's not disowned by his family coz he really is trying bless him (in a misguided way, but still trying)
naoya can behave like an ass, his sister will break up with him, and after enough time they can both come out. But Reading your Tokyo boys, it won't be that simple lol. Ultimately tho, when they finally do kiss it'll be the end of the pretense for both.
Ps I had a feeling you weren't gonna carry on with that scene :'(
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September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wait!!! I didn't read the latest chapter yet, but I read your A/N and I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LISTENED TO YOUR FRIEND!! It would have been ok if you were going to CONTINUE where you left off, but you didn't did you?? No...it's the morning already. THAT'S CRUEL!!!! AND MEAN!!!!! You need to find more sex-crazed friends! lol (j/k, but seriously, you didn't continue????) :(
Ok, gonna start the chapter now.
Ok, gonna start the chapter now.
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September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahah, your A/N at the bottom was pretty funny! Taking it from someone who found this item in an empty tissue box, in the garbage can, jeez! My kid KNOWS I break down the cardboard and recycle tissue boxes!!!! Ewww, that's the LAST thing you want to find in your son's room! lol
But anyway, moving along, great chapter. I felt bad when Ayumu wouldn't kiss Naoya. I know they had the "relationship and sister" talk, but they're already feeling emotional towards one another, I don't think kissing will make their feelings much stronger. Naoya is already "oversexed"! Ayumu has turned him into a nympho! hahah
Well all I can say is, sooner or later, when Naoya is over, Ayumu's sister and parents are going to be able to see what's going on. Naoya and Ayumu may be oblivious to other people, but family and friends can tell these things. They'll be able to see by the way they look at each other, or act with each other.
Anyway, great job and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
But anyway, moving along, great chapter. I felt bad when Ayumu wouldn't kiss Naoya. I know they had the "relationship and sister" talk, but they're already feeling emotional towards one another, I don't think kissing will make their feelings much stronger. Naoya is already "oversexed"! Ayumu has turned him into a nympho! hahah
Well all I can say is, sooner or later, when Naoya is over, Ayumu's sister and parents are going to be able to see what's going on. Naoya and Ayumu may be oblivious to other people, but family and friends can tell these things. They'll be able to see by the way they look at each other, or act with each other.
Anyway, great job and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I knew the captain would know!!! I love him!
Poor Ayumu! So troubled and who would have thought that Naoya can be so naughty!
Poor Ayumu! So troubled and who would have thought that Naoya can be so naughty!
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, it's been awhile, glad to see these boys back in business...altho I must say, I DO NOT LIKE THE WAY THIS CHAPTER ENDED!!!! Now I am waiting with bated breath for the next one!! lol
I see Naoya can see straight thru Ayumu's protests and feelings. hahah
I'm sorta torn if Naoya should confess to Ayumu's sister. Either way she'll be devastated. And she'll hate them both, and I know for Ayumu, that'll be the worst. So, he's trying to protect her which is understandable. But she'll find out sooner or later and if not going to be from a confession from either Naoya or Ayumu, it'll be b/c Naoya will eventually lose all interest in her sexually; she'll know something's up. She'll be able to tell, with the way Naoya and Ayumu look at each other. That will hurt more than anything. Either way she'll be hearbroken. So, Idk....I want to see Ayumu and Naoya together, of course, but I don't want to see his sister hurt, either.
Oh, and about the condoms, didn't they go bareback in the shower??????
I see Naoya can see straight thru Ayumu's protests and feelings. hahah
I'm sorta torn if Naoya should confess to Ayumu's sister. Either way she'll be devastated. And she'll hate them both, and I know for Ayumu, that'll be the worst. So, he's trying to protect her which is understandable. But she'll find out sooner or later and if not going to be from a confession from either Naoya or Ayumu, it'll be b/c Naoya will eventually lose all interest in her sexually; she'll know something's up. She'll be able to tell, with the way Naoya and Ayumu look at each other. That will hurt more than anything. Either way she'll be hearbroken. So, Idk....I want to see Ayumu and Naoya together, of course, but I don't want to see his sister hurt, either.
Oh, and about the condoms, didn't they go bareback in the shower??????
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
One day I'm googling fanfiction n I come across this site. N on this site I come across this story which becomes my first read. I then keep coming back in hope of updates. I eventually sign up n I can now review! Yay me. Long story short? Lovin the story!
I'm gettin slightly frustrated with ayumu because he's being such a teenager about this isn't he? his Well intentions for his sister are rather ill concieved, n will end up hurting her more later on.
Also I was really worried that Naoya was gonna back off so I'm really glad that he didn't n we'r being privy to another hot if short scene.
Anyway loved the chapter n Pls update soon coz I start getting widrawal symptoms n that's a bitch to deal with :)
I'm gettin slightly frustrated with ayumu because he's being such a teenager about this isn't he? his Well intentions for his sister are rather ill concieved, n will end up hurting her more later on.
Also I was really worried that Naoya was gonna back off so I'm really glad that he didn't n we'r being privy to another hot if short scene.
Anyway loved the chapter n Pls update soon coz I start getting widrawal symptoms n that's a bitch to deal with :)
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It is getting better and better by the minutes, but I can't believe u left us hanging like that. What an evil author lol. On the bright side, hopefully we will get to see those two lovely boys in action (knowing smirk) in the next chapter =)
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August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just stumbled upon this fic by accident, and now I'm completely hook. I hope you will continue to update more chapter. I can't wait to see what will happen next.