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more than five people are reading!! i'm sorry that you feel so frustrated but you have a lot of loyal readers....i usually wait until the end to leave really long comments but I'll start now....

1) ayumu's chathat you wouldn't be frustrated...but yea i understand you would want more in depth comments... but i usually wait until the racter is very well written...not that i know many teenage boys addicted to baseball, but he's acts/thinks/talks very much like one. thank god that he doesn't seem like a girl since he's the "uke" if he could even be considered that.

2) this one's a question...i understand that it's part of naoya's personality to keep things bottled up...but i still feel as if it's hard to really understand how his feelings arose...maybe it's just me who like to read every little detail or something idk but his quiet demeanor does still suit his character very much

3) I really like this situation where the brother falls in love with his sister's boyfriend! I think you milked this idea quite well and kept it very exciting...and you write really good smex scenes so yea you should keep them in there because not everyone can write them well XD

4)i've also read tokyo boys and loved that one too...but i like this one more! i like how this one keeps me on my toes....can't wait to see what happens next (i.e. will ayumu flake?).

Also, please keep updating... i always look for this story to be updated on the site :)

Awwww, he confessed!! I'm happy :D loved Naoya's reaction, very fitting of how you embroider his character.

I'm glad your continuing with the story; I know what you mean about not recieving feedback from readers. When I post a new chapter I sort of look at how many views it had, and when out of all the view it, only a few review it, it sorta makes you think that theyr obviously not liking it, and it's not good enough.
But your story is fab, and your writing style is very engaging. Never in a million years did I think I'd read anything baseball related ( it's not big in the Uk) but I am and lovin it. Keep up the good work.

Hey Myth! On one hand, I'm so glad you're back; I've been missing this story! But on the other hand, I'm sad to think that you would think of not posting on here anymore. I know that all, or maybe even most readers don't comment. I actually know a few authors, and I NEVER see their comments on any story. Just by the hit count, you know a lot of people are reading this terrific story. I loved this story and your Tokoyo Boys story. Your characters are great and so comical, and you write extremely well for a non-native of the English language!

I also wanted to thank you for the shout-out! It made my night! :)

We in the states, also have the mercy rule and I also believe it's 10 runs, or maybe 15, no I think it's 10 also.

Anyway, I haven't read the chapter, but will get to it right away!

Oh man! I can't believe you ended the chapter there! You're so mean!!! I was really getting into the game! lol Now I have to wait to see how Naoya did! I'm hoping that the talk and his confession and Ayumu's confession put his mind at ease and now he'll be able to pitch a perfect game. Well, once the rain lets up. Omg, that really brought back memories. Reading the part with the rain coming down, I remember many baseball games my kids were in that got rained out right in the middle of the game.

Anyway....great chapter! I'm so glad they confessed their feelings for each other. Finally! :) And you know, I was thinking when Naoya was explaining why he decided to go out w/Ayumu's sister, maybe she feels the same way. Maybe she's just not that into the relationship also. I mean after all; if you're head over heels in love with someone, you want to spend every waking minute with that person. She barely sees him! And she's ok with that. Maybe she's just dating him out of convenience for her also, or just to say she has a boyfriend, Idk...I just think, if it were ME, dating this gorgeous hunk of a baseball player, I'd be at every game, I'd be calling him and want to see him constantly. So maybe Ayumu has it all wrong.

Well, can't wait for the next chapter to fnd out how these boys are doing! Great job Myth and I'm so glad you're back! I remember last year (shit, was it a year ago already?!) you mentioned you wouldn't be posting Tokoyo Boys until December, b/c of the Nano writing thingy. Wow, a whole year!!! So, I'm glad these boys are back. :)

Hi!!! Sorry I haven't reviewed until now, I just discovered your story a week ago and I've been devouring it in my free time :3
I love Ayumu, he's such a wonderful character! And I love your sex scene and plot development, it's different and I really don't know what to expect for the chapter to come. Please update soon!
Your new fan
Milly

Ahhh Ayumu-chan, you can't have it all ..... Naoya knows that. Your friend Ryuji knows that toying with personal feelings is a no-go. Just you try to find a way to have it all. It's too late now, the mess is done and more people will be hurt now.

Nice to see how things are tightening up now!

No sex and I still enjoyed it lol
I'm looking forward to how the dynamics are gonna change now. Also did Ryuuji (I've probably butchered the name) realise that Naoya was there?

Yes, I feel bad for Ayumu; he's so torn with sparing his sister's feelings and his own feelings for Nayoa. Of course in this chapter, it seemed like Ayumu really didn't like Nayoa. And poor Nayoa; now he really fell for Ayumu!

But Ayumu's sister is already feeling Nayoa's distance. I think she's gonna feel so much anxiety with him. The first thing she's gonna think of is that he's cheating on her. I think that's what all girls think of when their guys become distant.

And poor Ryuuji (ok, sorry, really screwed up that name!), he didn't get his first kiss from someone he really liked. But it seemed like a great kiss, all the same! lol I mean, he only pulled away when the door slammed shut!

Now Ayumu's gonna have to deal with a jealous Nayoa. :)

sweet Jesus, kissing Ryuuji is the stupidest thing that Ayumu had ever done so far. Wow he just keeps on digging deeper, and deeper grave for himself. I hope he would think for once he acts. If I were Ryuuji I would have been very pissed off too. You don't attacked your best friend out of the blue (stole his first kiss at that), told him that you're gay, and them asked him to pretend to be your boyfriend all in one day. I think that is a bit too much for a guy to handle. Talk about being a bubble head, Ayumu really fits the description. As for my poor handsome Naoya <3 I hope he is not too heartbroken =( here is my special message for him "NAOYA KEEPS FIGHTING FOR AYUMU (I'm still cheering Ayumu even though he is a bubble head) I KNOW HE GONNA CRACK IN ANY MINUTES NOW =) AFTER ALL WHO CAN RESIST YOUR CHARM <3"

oh and I forgot to mention that I still want Naoya and Ayumu together <3 even though Ayumu is a bubble head (well he is a cute bubble head lol). As for Ayumi, I also already like her, but she is absolutely not allow to come in the way of my yaoi lol. sorry Ayumi, Naoya belongs to Ayumu =) you're pretty and smart, a very good combo in any guys' book, you can get another guy very easily (well probably not as hunky as Naoya)