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That little scene did funny things to me :S
lurved it. I love how Naoya couldn't wait to get his hands on him, and how he was jealous when the girls' attention was on him.
Loved the banter, loved everything :D

So before I even read this new chapter, I'd like to express my feelings for ur situation. I know what it feels like to post a chapter and see your views and hits increase dramatically but get little to no feedback. I just posted a chapter that in the spance of 48 hours got 400 views on fanfiction.net and about 150 on here, and yet I received a whopping total of 3 reviews. It's disgraceful and upsetting when you really want to hear people's input.

Therefore, here's mine:

I have a few stories here that I bookmarked and check EVERYDAY. I've been checking this one since I first pulled it up. I'm quite sure I read all 24 chapters in 1 day, then saw ch. 25 come out sometime later and read that. Since then, I've been waiting avidly for an update. I have yet to read this new chapter but I can hardly wait! I love that these two characters who love the same sport are so very different in all the right places. Also, that they have this huge issue of battling homosexuality As well as the ongoing 'relationship' with the sister, is a mega drama that happens to many people. The situation is realistic: A&B are best friends / siblings and A dates C but B and C are truly IN LOVE... it's interesting to see how these two will go about this, especially since they have a bit of a rivalry and age difference. I'm super excited to read!

Your fellow righter and fan,
Makki :D

I love, love, love this story! Now, is this enough for you to keep it up? I don't really know how you could ever doubt that people loved this! It's so hot, so delicious, so plotty and supremely wonderful. I loved Tokyo Boys as well, and was very pleased to see that you had written another story. So don't ever stop writing because this is a GREAT piece of work. Please update soon because I just HAVE to know what happens next. Keep up the amazing work!

Ahhhhh~ *waves arms about*
you updated! You updated!! Yaaay thankyou very much! ^^
Pfffft that was a wicked little chapter! Ryuuji hitting Ayumu,
Ayumu and Naoya make up and have a very cute make out
session!
And then you end it there! -.-" teeease! Lol
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I don't think you need to explain the games or use termonolgy
I'm not the brightest spark for understanding baseball games but I
understand what's happening in this story. So I wouldn't worry
too much about explaining. But then again it's up to you as it is
you story ^^ Hehe
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Anyway another brill chapter missy!
keep up the wicked writing. I apologise for not commenting on
the other chapters but because I emailed you when I read them
I totally forgot what chapter, I had commented, up to >.<
promise to leave more reviews as long as you keep updating ;)
lol
BBFN (bye bye for now) ^^
xMoonlitx

THEY'RE BACK TOGETHER!!!....I think. Love it so farXD, and the suspense is killing me!!

I really love this story:) I love the characters, the pace of the story, and the entire plot. This is one of my favorite stories and I'm sorry to hear that you feel your work is unappreciated. I haven't reviewed before because I really didn't have any critism for this story as I just love it soo much. :P I really enjoy this story and I hope you continue it. And if i find I dislike somethingor find someway to critisize this story I'll make sure to tell you. ^-^

Hey Myth! Milly here. Congrats on winning your NaNo!
I'm so glad you aren't dropping that story after all - it was always on my mind when I checked AFF for updates.
It's good that they're back together, but how will they work things out around Ayumi? You will surprise us, I'm sure... :3 And I really admire your capacity at making us hooked on the baseball suspense as well as the 'romance' suspense, lol.
Hoping for the next update,
Milly

I'm so glad they have finally admitted their feeling to each other. Now maybe they can move forward to the next stage in their relationship. I got to admit that I actually thought that those two stubborn idiots would never give in and confess (well at least not this soon), but now that everything is in the open, their future together seemed a lot brighter. I just hope that they can fine a way to tell the sister soon, so all three of them can move on. I swear, attractive female character does not mix well with yaoi =) the sooner we get get rid of her, the better.

I bookmarked your profile and take a look daily for updates. Thanks for another wonderful chapter~ I simply love love love this story!!! Psst, the interaction between Naoya and Ayumu is so awkward yet endearing~ *giggles* Please keep on updating this story!

I hope they tell his sister soon! I hate the dishonesty, though it's a good way to extend the story.