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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story reads like a Miyazaki anime. I expect Totoro to come bounding around the corner. Except in his stories, the lead characters are always young girls. You have a cute story so far. I am in chapter 2.
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January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oooo i smell angstiness coming up!!! and that sasajima again! he's like a lurking shadow! can't wait for the next one. ooo and I'm still enjoying more of this naoya...and it'd be really interesting to see his date with ayumu's sis too and then ayumu's anger maybe? lol great job :D!
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January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh, Naoya is a devil! Now someone besides the captain seems to know ...... I am thrilled!
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January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great job, hope this doesn't end soon XD
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January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Naoya was so romantic, I want to say, when he was telling Ayumu that he didn't want anyone to be with him, girls or guys. He wanted Ayumu to himself and vice-versa.
I feel bad for Ayumu; not being able to celebrate the big win with Naoya. You know, I just finished a story on another site, that also had to deal with a boy falling in love with his sister's boyfriend, only to find out the b/f is really gay. They also wound up getting together. I feel bad for Ayumu's sister; she has this false sense of security that everything's fine between her and Naoya. He is putting on a good act though. Eventually he's gonna crack; he won't be able to be with her and she's gonna get suspicious.
Anyway...I'm glad you update; I really love this story! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)
I feel bad for Ayumu; not being able to celebrate the big win with Naoya. You know, I just finished a story on another site, that also had to deal with a boy falling in love with his sister's boyfriend, only to find out the b/f is really gay. They also wound up getting together. I feel bad for Ayumu's sister; she has this false sense of security that everything's fine between her and Naoya. He is putting on a good act though. Eventually he's gonna crack; he won't be able to be with her and she's gonna get suspicious.
Anyway...I'm glad you update; I really love this story! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)
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January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo, you can't leave it there u evil evil author!!!
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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The beast in Naoya! Awwww and my allknowing captain appeared again. One could assume he threw Ayumu into Naoya's arms just to improve his playing!!!
Anyway, running into Ayumi and the revellation of a hickey is sure an interesting turn of events ..... I feel the drama coming!
Anyway, running into Ayumi and the revellation of a hickey is sure an interesting turn of events ..... I feel the drama coming!
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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, Ayumu's so cute; trying to sic Naoya on the fangirls; now he's stuck with them also! But it's gonna be hard for him to watch his sister touch Naoya and hug and kiss him.
Funny about the hickey too; they're all assuming it came from some random girl...
Yeah, Myth; I can't believe a year has passed already; it went way too fast! :(
Funny about the hickey too; they're all assuming it came from some random girl...
Yeah, Myth; I can't believe a year has passed already; it went way too fast! :(
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December 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Ayumu saved the day :3:3:3
Naoya is such a pervo! I wonder what he's planning to do next...
I'm happy you updated! Hopefully you'll have plenty of free time over the next month to update more! :D
Milly
Naoya is such a pervo! I wonder what he's planning to do next...
I'm happy you updated! Hopefully you'll have plenty of free time over the next month to update more! :D
Milly
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December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this was such a funny chapter! my favorite part was ryuuji thinking ayumu could see auras because of his one eye LOL! ooo and i also like this passionate naoya too ;). hahaha they got kidnapped by fangirls XD, wish i was with them :D.