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April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just about fell off my chair when I saw this updated!! I love all the lil sweet moments between ayumu n noaya; loved that he wanted to punch the cousin for kissing him, loved that their legs were entwined during the meal. I feel bad for ayumu. If his family forgive him for being gay, they won't be so tolerant for his betrayal to his sister, coz ultimately that's what it is. Love that the sister is finally catching on that they are quite chummy. It's sad really, coz if naoya went ahead with his plan, of seeing her less, maybe even mistreating her so that she dumps him, she would feels good about getting out of the relationship, and she won't be hurt by the knowledge that her brother stole het man away. Anyway, I find ayumu disillusioned about the whole thing, but then I've told u that already lol she I'll stop before I sound like an old record! Loved the chapter, love the pair, just dreading the shit that will hit the fan!
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April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great job!
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March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG ARE YOU EVER GONNA UPDATE?? IM HAVING WITHDRAWAL SYMPTOMS
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February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, Ayumu you little coward!!! This circle of lies involving already so many people is going to draw them all into a mess. Interesting to see how your personal choice affects so many outsiders in a way you didn't even think of. The mechanisms of fate it seems.
Anyway, interesting to see how much Ayumu tries to stick to his naive perspective and strongly avoids facing the truth. He doesn't even see how much stress he puts on Naoya, I am glad Sasajima said it out loud, yay! I am all excited about the things to come!
Anyway, interesting to see how much Ayumu tries to stick to his naive perspective and strongly avoids facing the truth. He doesn't even see how much stress he puts on Naoya, I am glad Sasajima said it out loud, yay! I am all excited about the things to come!
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February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I thought the bet would be something like a full day of sex of sometin...hehe anyway, great job and please upadte asap xD!!
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ooo this chapter was awesome...lol it had like everything in it....cuteness, smut, drama, guilt, angst, lol!! i'm actually really enjoying Naoya's real personality; he definitely has a lot more character depth and is more interesting...and I'm totally enjoying Ayumu's internal struggle--I guess it's only a matter of time before he 'explodes' and I wonder how his sis and Naoya's going to handle it? Anyways, keep up the good work and am looking forward to the next one :D!
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February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great job on the chapter as always :)
and as always you've managed to surprise with the way story unfolds...and I gotta say that I enjoy that it's impossible to guess what'll happen next and what'll be the next twist in the story :D
and as always you've managed to surprise with the way story unfolds...and I gotta say that I enjoy that it's impossible to guess what'll happen next and what'll be the next twist in the story :D
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February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I haven't had time to read the chapter yet, but I wanted to let you know I'll be emailing you later w/the info on the other story. My email has been acting up, and MSN told me to wait half an hour to open it up. So when it's up and running, I'll email you!
Oh, and I'll r & r! lol
Oh, and I'll r & r! lol
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February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I bet Ayumu feels more guilt now, now since his un-suspecting sister baked him a baseball cake! :(
On the plus side: Naoya is feeling the same feelings that Ayumu is feeling; so that's good!
I'll email you the link to the other story as soon as I pick my kid up from wrestling practice! :)
On the plus side: Naoya is feeling the same feelings that Ayumu is feeling; so that's good!
I'll email you the link to the other story as soon as I pick my kid up from wrestling practice! :)
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh please say he will make him tell his sister.