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for Wild Pitch

by myth

schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, it seems Ayumu may be headed for denial! I like the way he bosses Ryuuji around; why does Ryuuji take it? And question: Ayumu's house is an hour from the school? And he has to be on the field for practice at 6 AM? Jesus, that is dedication!!!!! And my kids complain when their school bus ride is longer than 15 minutes! Hahahah
person cimke
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting read! I must admit that I love the captain, although he is just a side character.
I wonder who scared little Takai? A famous baseball player dad? *speculations*

Can't wait to read more of the little brat's way into the baseball team .... and his sexual awakening!
person kylee123
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Ayumu has a big time crush on Naoya. I am eager to see what happens next.
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this story last week when you first posted it. I didn't pay attention to the author until today. I kept saying to mayself, Myth 720, Myth 720, where do I know that name from????? And it wasn't until I read your A/N that I realized, you're the one that writes Tokoyo Boys!!!!! That is a fucking fantastic story!!!!!!! So, of course I have to read this b/c you are a fabulous writer!

I like how Ayumu is so proud and brave, but also careless at the same time, not caring how many enemies he's making! He really is a little brat. Hopefully Ryuuji can keep him from "spilling blood"! I hope they both make the team!
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
person khayman
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I'm so glad to find someone who rights so well and picks themes so dear to my fangirl heart!
I just love sports themed yaoi mangas and novels, so this one is right up my alley.
I noticed it's been a while since you updated this story in comparison to Tokyo Boys (which I'm simply adoring too), I hope you hvn't given up on it.
I can guaranty you already hv a fangirl here so... please update soon! ^^