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Ahha, his first wet dream; poor Ayumu!!! And now he'll be gone for a week at a training camp w/Naoya! Ok, also w/his other teammates, but we can try to overlook them! Haha I'm so glad you've updated this; I've missed Ayumu!


I was thinking, maybe you can do a crossover w/Yuuto and Ayumu's best friend Ry(I don't know how to spell his name, sorry). Just a thought; they seem very alike!

Stupid me! I thought my first review didn't make it, so I did another one. Sorry!

Yay! Ayumu and Ryuuji both made it to the team! I knew Ayumu would make it even though they gave him the last spot to humble him a little. He is a brat. Love the story. Keep up the good writing.

Heheh, they made the little brat wait. Still love the captain very much, yay!
I really like Ryuuji, he and Ayumu have an interesting friendship. Curious for their further development.

Great chapter 4. I am really enjoying the story. I have my fingers crossed that Ayumu will make it to the team without a problemm. I hope that Ryuuji will too. Ayumu is getting more attracted to Naoya every day. That will make things interesting at home for sure. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

hmmm I'm not quite sure I like Ryuuji... he kinda comes out as a little coward. is it just me?
4.30 am?!? if I had to wake up that early to go to school, I'd be dead halfway through the school year! =.=
poor Ayumu will be half dead from boredom when it gets to his turn to bat. lol
well, update soon please!

Oh that Naoya fanboy! Lil' cheeky brat .... curious to see how he's learning a few things ^^

Boy, Ayumu acts like a spoiled little kid sometimes, doesn't he? When he doesn't get what he wants. The Japanese baseball season is so different than American baseball. At least the club teams. I know, well, actually I only know Little League and Jr. Babe Ruth, not high school rules, and they don't have those tough exams and early practices like in Japan. My kids would have NEVER lasted!

another chappy!!! *glomps Myth and accidentaly tackles her/him to the floor* oops sowy!! ;P
ok I know it's pretty obvious to pretty much anyone who's paying attention that Ayumu has a huge crush on Naoya, which he'll probably figure out quite fast himself since he just caught himself masturbating to the guy's memory... but is Naoya already aware of his own interest in Ayumu or does he still see Ayu only as his girlfriend's cute baby brother?
by the way how old are Ayumu and Naoya? I know you mentioned Ayumu is on his 1st year of highschool and Naoya is a year above but I'm portuguese and always end up getting confused while trying to make the connection between the japanese and my own school system, especially since they appear to hv totally diferent beginning/ending/vacations periods. I feel so dumb right now =_= *sighs*
and will the team captain reveal himself to be a rival for Ayu's attention, or will he rather serve as a 'supporting force' and help them get together? and and is Ayumi even remotely aware of the truth behind Ayumu's feelings for Naoya and vice-versa?
I know the story is only just in it's 2nd chapter but I'm that curious! XD
update soon please! or I'll do as I did to pesterme2 and put a mouse between her sheets! btw if you hvn't already I would recomend you to read her story Flaming in the Dorms, it's highly entertaining. quite like yours, but different! ^^

O.O wow thanks so much for the info and the pic (which was perfect, totally like I imagined them. specially Ayumu, so cheeky looking XD)! it definitly helped me with creating a more defined image of them in my head and that always makes stories much more fun. ^^
and the new chappy came so quick! yay! lol
Ayumu really has to learn to keep his mouth shut once in a while, else he'll find himself to busy with his punishments to actually play. and if Ayumu reacted like that to finding Naoya topless in his bathroom just imagine how it would'v been like if he was naked! the boy would hv a stroke! lol
can't wait for their romance to truly develop, I love boyxboy smex! XD
update soon please!