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Wow! That was an exciting game! I felt like I was watching my kid's game! Altho, here in the States, I'm pretty sure that a player wouldn't even be allowed to have four fouls. I think each foul is considered an out. Unless I'm getting confused; sports isn't my forte, even after watching kids baseball games for 7 or 8 yrs.!

Good for Ryuuji! He must have really felt the pressure; two outs and bases loaded!

So, what's going on w/Naoya and Obata? Some unfinished childhood business? Or something deeper? Can't wait to find out!!!!

I've been to enough of my kids' baseball games; you're doing a great job!

I felt bad for Ayuum when he was almost mistaken for his sister!

You're doing great with the build-up; I can't wait to see what you have planned for these two boys! lol

ARGGHHHHH MAN I WANA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
please please please update soon I cant wait to find out what happens between them.

Thanks for the new chapter. I worry that Asami was going to leave Ayumu to get washed away by the river. I think that Ayumu does not realize that Asama is a serious threat. Scary. I am happy to see Ayumu and Naoya getting closer. I wonder how Naoya would react if he knew that Ayumu was attracted to him. I hope they manage to get a little closer while they are at camp. The story is going so well. Looking forward to reading more.

Hahah! indirect kiss XD
Not easy being a cocky first year. I'm glad Ryuji found a way to get help and didn't just hide being scared.

Ahahha! the conflicted past! Ayumu is sure a nagging boy ^^. Interesting set-up!

Love the scene in the changing room, haha!

*hugs you greatfully!*
Thankyou for updating. i'm sure these two chapters have been up for a while and to be honest i haven't had much 'time alone' but now i've read them and i love them..
i feel so sorry for young Ayumu.. hes getting the worst of it from the group, plus Ryuuji didn't help him v.v
was good that Ryuuji got Sasajima and Naoya though.
running up a mountain! ugh! can't think of anything worse lol!
So cute with the hot tub scene, as Naoya got undressed *giggles* and Naoya opened up to Ayumu.. thinking this could be the start of opening the romance maybe xD
Thankyou so much for uploading!
Continue the Wicked Writing!! :)
xMoonlitx
p.s you're not as bad at english as you think ^^ you do make sense.. but none the less if you need someone to check over i would be more than happy to help :D
xx

Poor Naoya, not seeing his family in so long and feeling like they don't even care. Why did Ayumu leave so quickly? He should have stayed more and talked; got to know Naoya better.

So glad you're continuing with this story! God, those asshole kids; I wanted to throw THEM in the river!

Thank God Ryuu (ok, sorry, Ayuum's friend, I keep messing up these names, next time I'm gonna write them down!), got help! Now Ayuum can stay right next to Nayao (I know, misspelled again! Sorry!)

Great chapter; I'm looking forward to the next!

Thanks for the new chapters. There is some serious tension between Ayumu and these older teammates. I hope they did not do anything to Ryuuji. It will not be good if they are always trying to sabotage Ayumu. I hope Naoya will get them to stop picking on Ayumu.