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OMG, poor Ayumu! I know I said this in my last comment how embarrassing it seemed for poor Ayumu and I'll say it again! lol

And how unusual? that Kaji wants to help him and agreed to teach him the wonders of Idk what! haha

And shame on Kaji for teasing him about Naoya; I was actually believing it!

Anyway, great chapter; can't wait for the real lessons to begin! lol

Holy- that- wow~
I'm so pleased you updated xD lol
I had a feeling kajihara might 'help' Ayu. So kean of Kaji to tease him
like that bout Naoya's feeling. I wonder how this relationship will
develop now. Wonder if Naoya might heard something and walk in,
or if he'll get jealous at all????
So many questions now! Ahhh~ lol
thankyou again for updating. Really appreicate your efforts ^^
continue with your Wicked Writing please!
xMoonlitx
p.s I can't log in at the moment so I don't know what/if you've replied
to one of my messages or not. Sorry. I might even have to make
Another countof here >.<
thankyou again. Ja Ne ^^
xXx

What has Ayumu gotten himself into now? I guess he feels that he does not have a chance with Naoya but he should think twice before letting Kaji get so free with him. Plus once he starts doing stuff with the team captain, it will not be so easy to end it. Thanks for the update. I really love this story.

I really am enjoying this story. I have always love stories about sports with cute boys in them. The fact that this is yaoi makes it even more amazing. I am loving the main character and his awesome crush. I do feel that it sucks that you have to kiss up to the seniors when you're a freshman, some of those seniors are really mean. Thankfully they have stopped picking on our little freshman. I am looking forward towards an update in this story, please update soon!

OMG!! Haha ending tothis chapter was hilarious xD
yet I couldn't help but feel embarressed for Ayumu lol
you have to upload the next chappie soon! Please! Want to know how he gets out of this situation lol!
Sorry I didn't comment sooner. Loved the other chapters too itsgood they're no longer
at the camp xD
can't wait to see how this ends!! Maybe Ayumi will be stolen and Naoya will be left alone for Ayumu..??
thankyou for updating your stories so regularly. I love them ^^
xMoonlitx
p.s I can't wait to see what happens next in TB too!! - how will Daisuke cope with Yuu-chan moving away? T.T
=O will Daisuke chase after him!?
-random note- I really love the name sasajima ♥ hehe ^^
xXx

Oh shit! What an idiot! He didn't think to go into the bathroom??????? I can't imagine how mortified he is right now!

Going back to the beginning of the chapter: these mothers in these stories on AFF don't know how fucking lucky they are!!!! Ayumu's mother is complaining he's late from batting practice; she should be thanking her lucky starts SHE doesn't have to go and pick his ass up every single day!!! These kids in these stories take buses, city buses, to get to where they need to be: school, home, work, etc. MY kids are so freaking lucky I drive them everywhere they go! I bet they don't even know we HAVE a city bus here!!!!! lol

I do know what Ayumu's parents are thinking tho about baseball and his grades. Altho his mom said "do better in school, or you will stay stupid." Does that mean she considers Ayumu stupid? Nice mother! Hahah

My middle son, he's a straight A student, takes all honors classes. He's on the wrestling team. He's been wrestling since he was 6 and he's 15 now. Our high school is undefeated in wrestling, the best in our state. He's the best wrestler in his weight class. A few weeks ago, he got an F (his first ever) on a Geometry test. His father is ready to pull him off the team. So, I know what Ayumu's parents are thinking: school before sports. Which I can't say I disagree with. Anyway, last week we had midterms and Zach was anxious about the Geometry midterm. I'm praying he did ok, otherwise you'll hear him screaming from here in CT. all the way where you are in Japan!!!!!! lol

Hehe, such a diligent boy -- studying hard for his genreal knowledge! Actually sad how he realized that his love can hardly be shown in public.

Naoya giving him a special service, haha! Poor Ayumu - and now, being caught by the captain. I wonder what he will do now, a captain's gotta take care of his team members.

How evil to leave the ending like that! I laughed until there were tears in my eyes. Poor Ayumu must be wishing he could just disappear into the floor. That poor boy is being tortured to death.

Ha!!!! You looked like Ayumi... HA! Lame excuse Naoya, laaaaame!

Interesting encounter there, guess you can't avoid things like that. Now I am curious about the game (total baseball expert ...not)

I knew Obata would make Naoya lose his cool! Yay for Ryuuji! And Asami apologizing totally surprised me.
Now I wonder how everything goes on .......