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I have a confession.....during ayumu's "private" lesson I was hoping for kajixayumu pairing but I still liked it. Great story! ^^

Been following this story it for a while and I really enjoy it. :). I love the relationship between the two leads ayumu and Noaya and the sports angle gives it a nice touch (plus it makes for some very hot scenes, haha). Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next update.

Naoya is a bad boy!!! ;p

Love Ryuuji's awkwardness, it's so cute actually. It will be interesting to see Naoya dealing with the childhood friend again. I am quite sure they'll defeat the 2 teams .... Very curious me ;p

Oh man Myth, I'm sorry to hear about your arm/shoulder. Is it a "frozen" shoulder? One of the authors I proof for, she has a frozen shoulder and is in a lot of pain waiting for it to heal. I hope yours is doing better.....You know it's amazing how we all take for granted every part of our body. When one part doesn't work like it used to, everything goes to shit. I know exactly how you feel and I hope you get better quickly.

So, it seems to me that Ryuuji is thinking too much about this gay/straight stuff. He's only what, fifteen? First year of high school? Not every fifteen year old has a g/f or b/f, that's for sure. All kids mature at their own pace; there are kids who don't think of girls or boys at that age. I know my sixteen year old, he has a lot of friends that are girls, but he hangs out w/only the wrestlers. (he is a wrestler). But at that age, my oldest already had a g/f, so it all depends on the kid. Anyway, I don't think Ryuuji should stress too much about it.

I LOVE seeing Nayoa jealous! He is too funny! Hahah, he thought Ayumu was flirting w/that other player! I like the jealous Nayoa! :)

Great chapter! I hope they win all their games but don't have to face that other guy from Nayoa's past. I'm still trying to figure out what's going on with them! lol

Yay new updat! When Ayumu's sis DOES finally find out about their relationship I realy dont see how she's gonna NOT feel angry and react badly no matter how much Ayumu apologizes. Who knows tho, perhaps she can see how much Ayumu and Naoya belong together and she'll hopefully move on. Good chappie like always! Update asap !

ahahah I like the smexy Naoya! Lol what a beast ;). I thought the part with Ryuuji is hilarious--I think you portrayed the teenage friendship banter thing perfectly and it was really amusing how Ryuuji totally spazzing over his new found knowledge! And ooo I like this little rivalry/jealousy deal that might ensue with the other teams' player--I'd really like to see where that goes b/c it seemed like he was totally checking Ayumu out :D! Anyways, a great read (as always) and looking forward to more :)

Amazing story! I couldn't help but smile when Naoya became jealous. There are so many little things building up, like Ryuuji finding out and Ayumu's sister plus like a hundred other things. I can't wait to see how it all comes together!

The family scene conveyed such closeness and warmth. Poor poor Ayumu, he's getting into deeper trouble each day he's trying to delay the unavoidable confession.
Let's see if these troubled minds can concentrate on Koshien hard enough to actually win.

Hey, thank God you're back! I'm glad things worked out well w/your family and friends in Japan. :)

I woulda been freaking out if I were in Ayumu's place when his relatives came over! I'd also be worried they'd see something in my face whenever I looked at Naoya. I'm actually surprised Ayumi didn't notice anything, other than the fact that her brother and her "b/f" seem to be getting chummier. Loved the line the mom gave Ayumu: So you finally realized you have a home. Or something like that! I'll have to remember that one! lol

Ayumu and Naoya better be careful in the hotel; they certainly don't want anyone other than say Ryuuji catching them again! lol

Great chapter! Looking foward to the next one! :)

awww poor Ayumu...I wonder how long his conscience can bear it! And wow it's kinda surprising to see how head over heels Naoya is for him! I loved the hectic family scene, it was cute and very realistic! ;) But poor Ayumi...especially now she's suspecting something! I wonder if Ryuuji is gonna slip up and accidentally reveal their relationship!!! Great chapter and glad to see you updated! I'm glad your loved ones are ok in the middle of all the tragedy :)