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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting
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August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far all you have is an intro and a discription of the characters, so far that does not constitute a story... keep writing and developing the story further...then the reviews will come. Sincerely G
schedule
August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
All I can ask is for you to please finish this story like an actual story. I hope the rest of this isn't a profile. I'm assuming that was the prologue. It went to fast.
It seems like it would be a good story so please update something that takes more than 30 seconds to absorb. Some dialogue, maybe? xoxo
It seems like it would be a good story so please update something that takes more than 30 seconds to absorb. Some dialogue, maybe? xoxo