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for Playing it Hand to Mouth

by LouisAlaska

schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story and I love it!

I hope you continue it someday, even though it's been 2 years already....
person M.Storm
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story sofar. Looks like an alsome setup
person Anon
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think the most disappointing thing about this story is that there isn't a third chapter. You write well and do it in such a way that it's believable. Your characters are just bursting with personality, and I really enjoyed this. It's a refreshing breath in a sea of--well, lesser stories. Also, I like to see more simple romances. It seems to allow more focus to be placed on interaction and character development as opposed to people who think throwing demons and vampires at you makes a good read.
person jay
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really likes this story i hope you won't abandon us and leave us hanging cause the story is really great and sounds really good so far, hope you will update soon ^^
person Iconic
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this! I admire the way it is written; it seems very "real" especialy the dialouge and the way you spell phoneticaly- like when Nolan says b-t-dub and the likes. It seems like an intersting plot and I am definatly looking forward to an update!
person kylee
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice start to your story. I would love to read some more.
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I can "hear" Sean's southern accent! Poor Nolan, he better watch out; Sean doesn't want to be tutored in acting any more than Nolan wants to tutor him. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Mica
schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far...very cliche plot, but well written.
But I had to laugh about your german sentence...It was really messed up.

It has to be: "Warum bist du noch nicht verheiratet Nolan?"

I hope the next chapter will be coming soon...
person nini
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this so far! I don't know if you meant to do it, but this is looking to be almost exactly like the movie 'Were the World Mine', although it could just be that the theme is an everlasting cliche. Please don't take that to be flames, I really enjoy this story and will continue to read it and any other stories you put up (that aren't het. *shudder*).
Please keep up the good work!
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story sounds great! I hope you continue w/it. One little typo, you spelled Sean Shawn once. No biggie. But seriously, really good story!