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huhu,
I knew this would happen to Natalie,but I can`t say I´m sorry for her...(evil me):)
I don`t like Christophe,Vincent should fight him and claim Ryder as his knew pet!:()
I hope you get better soon.I`m ill too.Sitting inside and coughing my lung out...grrr.
Please write more,Jules

Playing EBM, eh? Sounds more like an Industrial Rave. I don't think you would want Ravers ruining a great club night. I could see this as a special event maybe, but not a rave. Unless, the raves are a lot different in your area than the ones I've been to.

I was quite entertained by this piece. The end gore-fest was most needed. I think an element of fear definitely makes the read more enjoyable. And the realism. Drinks are always ridiculously expensive XD Always get smashed before hand! Also, if Ryder (the name just makes me think of my idiot cousin) is wearing fuck-tastic boots, why is he covering them with baggy pants? I like that you had him plan to wear the contacts and then decide against them. I go through the same thing before I go out. There was much more in the "like" department, but I'm lazy. I'll just leave it at- I liked it. A lot. "Goth" club scenes are never written this accurately even though you amped it up quite a bit. But since Vamps are running the show, this is allowed.

Hmm... what else? Oh, yeah. Is the club named after the song Vena Cava? I know it's an vein, but if you would just indulge me, that would be great.

OuO
I demand to see more of this.
This story is too sexy.
<3

ooo, a vampire story!
I got really excited when I saw you'd started another story and I'm glad you did!
Smexy vampires are amazing ;) and the rave scene was really cool.
I can't wait for more!

Oh my God. First off, amazing start. I love Ryder and the story so far is very intriguing. But what about Natalie? Gah, I wonder if she's dead. If so, then Vincent isn't a good guy. Well, he is a vampire. But still. I like the other guy a lot (the one with Ryder). He had promised not to kill him, so maybe he isn't too bad or anything. I think. Though I'm sure he'll be pissed when he realizes that Ryder hit him on the head...

Anyway, great start so far! It's so hard to find good vampire stories (slash wise) and I'm glad I found this one :) I can't wait to find out what happens to Ryder, and whether or not his friend is dead (or where Simon might be) and of course, what the two vampires are going to do. Please update soon!

I like it very much. I hope you continue this.
bye
M

Love it please update ASAP!!I read it twice and me and my mates are arguing about whether Ryder will end up with Vincent or Christopher...Please tell me..pretty please:(

Ahhh!! I like it a lot!! Update soon??

I'm sorry for your ear infection. This was a good story, pretty creepy, I don't usually like vampires, or anything out of the ordinary. So......I hope you get to sleep tonight, but if you don't, maybe an update on my favorite Jacob??????? Please, pretty please, with pink, refrigerated medicine???????? Ok, but seriously, I do hope you feel better, being sick in the summertime sucks.

Duude! Are you going to write a sequel?