rate_review Reviews

SQUWEEEEEE!!! I LOVE vampire stories! Especially well written ones, and I'm not worried at all about this one not being well done XD Cuz I love your work! lol Gosh, I'm so curious as to what's gonna happen to poor Ryder! Christophe didn't seem too bad of a guy, since he was asking rather than taking, but that's just how I'm thinking so far XD Vincent, on the other hand... =( Poor Natalie... I hope Simon hasn't fallen into the same fate as her too... >< RUN RYDER!!!!

XD Update whenever possible matey!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.. MY FUCKING GOD. WHY ARE YOUR STORIES SO GODDMAN GOOD!?! fffffff whyyyyyyyyyyyy god whyyyyyyy
anyway.. moving on..

First of all, Vincent sounds really hot. Besides that name is just orgasmic. I would be a perm resident of a vampire blood rave orgy club. That'd be hot. I'd die happy. Yes, Christophe, you may feed off me. Blood slut ftw. Anyway... what was I saying... oh, right, nothing. I love you. Like a lot. I don't even think the sex happened yet. But it was hot. Theodore is a cute name. Theo is even cuter. I hope Natalie's not dead... actually no. I wouldn't care either way but I want Theo to get some Vincent and I think she'd be in the way. Hopefully, if she's not dead, she'll be traumatized or some shit. Anyway, yes, more blood slut!Theo is a must.

I really love the first chapter and Ryder. Cute, punk, vertically challenged boys are hot. Can't wait for the next installment. Please update soon! ^_^

Yay! Looks like a very good beginning of a very good sexy vamp story! Prime quality writing too.
Sorry to hear that you don't feel well. Best quick recovery wishes!
And please continue, Im dying to read mooore! Take care!

then what?

Very intense start!

Wow !
It's so great ! Very well done !
Please update soon

yes yes please continue. i think its absolutely hot an i hope ryder and that chris guy end up together some how. and what about the friend is he dead too?

Well I liked it...but you shouldn't waste, all that lovely scarlet nectar on the floor Grrrrrrrrrr

That was HAWWWWTTTT! Man why are vampires just so irresistibly hot? I tried to r/v earlier but my internet died on me straight after rating the story; the hotness of the fic probably burned my internet connection :p
Anyway seems like its a product of your ear infection + pain meds + blade inspiration; I wouldn't normally say this to someone I don't know but maybe ear infections can be a good thing.
Please keep going - and ahhh... hopefully that means Ryder will somehow survive this! He seems like a cute little (I know he'll kill me) bugger - even though he spent most the chapter on a LSD/"...diabetes inducing cocktail" trip lol. As awful as this sounds somehow I don't really care about Natalie; must be something to do with her squealing. You built it up so nicely this could also act as a oneshot... but do keep going XD