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So this is what happens when listening to raw, brutal cyberpunk while writing! Now I understand!

Tight bondage pants? My apologies, they are so rare, I forgot they existed! And I never was able to watch Blade, it puts me to sleep.

First off- I'm so glad you use the term "aggrotech" as apposed to the lame alternatives like "Terror EBM." It shows you have great taste. Also, I think all the crazed Anne Rice fans have been replaced by an enemy far more dangerous- Twilight fans. I'm still not sure where all The Crow fans went. Haven't seen one of those in a while... Next, hurray for hot deathrock chicks. Although, I have yet to meet one with an intelligence greater than that of a rock. Wow. this story is almost an goth scene fanfiction rather than a vampire one. In a good way, of course.

Okay, so I feel there is not enough happening for the amount of detail. Development is all fine and dandy, but I found myself skimming a bit. No need to fret, some light editing will fix this. I almost want to suggest changing reality so that vampires have never been heard of and all these mini-scenes could be sprinkled with Ryder figuring out what the fuck is going on. Just an idea, but it could be fun.

Can't wait to read your next installment! No srsly, I'm going to hold my breath.

Oh gods. I love this story. It started out great! I hope you keep the good work up! I wonder about Christophe..is her going to get with Rider or is Vincent going to like dump Natalie for Ryder? I dunno, but I'm reading this story all the way baby!

Chapter 2 - Vincent is hot. My brain understands this even in its 24 hours awake state. Locked in with a hot guy? Not too bad. Locked in with a vampire? Uhh... Locked in with a hot guy vampire? Yes, please~

Also, I love you. I think I've said that before but just in case I didn't.

Like the story. Its really good. So please continue and keep up the good work.

I loved this chapter, but damn! why wasn't she killed....but I guess that's better for usXD because Vincent would be hated if he killed herXD anyways, I really hope Ryder ends up with Vincent in the endxD and not Christophe?Xd was it?
But why did you have to stop were it reallyreally realllllyy got interested...
Thank you for the chapter and I hope you update soon!

ps: still love the name Vincent + vampires!

yay updates oh how i <3 them so much ^^

aff hates me it always seems to cut my reviews short as i was trying to say lol

yay updates oh how i <3 them so much

Nice story! I want more! XD

Eeeeee! XD I'm so happy you updated this! I was afraid that it was gonna be a one-time practice deal or something. YAY, I was wrong! lol Anyhoo ^_^ Great job so far! I'm so scared for poor Ryder (love his name, btw ;P ) and I hope this Vincent guy isn't gonna hurt him... or his friends... I'm still unsure if Ryder's gal friend is actually okay or not. Vincent could have turned her into a ghoul or whatever for all we know! =O
Can't wait 'till yer next update ^_^ Whether is be for this story, or your other one! LOVE them both!

OMG I LOVE YOU! I LOVE VAMPIRES AND II FCKING LOVE THE NAME VINCENT!
and you made a vampire fic with the name vincent ayayayay!
I love it! wtfXD you have officialy become my best writer everXD I'm gonna become your number one stalker!
anyways I love it and I hope Vincent will be Ryder's seme or w/e cause...well he is fcking coolXD and his nameeee aaaaaaaayyy XD
dammit one chapter and I'm hooked! I'm glad I searched for more stories of youXD otherwise I would've never seen this!!! waaah waaah waaahXD
I love itXD and sorry for the stupid comment...but you rule! you are the best writer! + best plot writer everXDXD or something:P
anddd I love your name choice and the angst!!!! waaaawww
anyways please oooh please update soon! I'm beggin you

Btw I hope you will get better soon and the mean infection will dissapear!
Good luck and take your time if you need a break..:D