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July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I liked this story but I can't get into it because Clara is so well such a cry baby. I know she's in a world where she's so much weaker but all she does is cry or whine every chapter. Anywho I liked everything else :-)
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February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I find you story entertaining and I hope you continue it!! However, I did notice several gramatical and spelling mistakes throughout so it might be prudent to look into getting a beta! Otherwise its very good.
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great going story. Very well written I look forward to new chapters
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July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good! I hope you update soon! I am very anxious to find out what is going to happen.
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story I cant wait for the next chapter. Are you on fiction Press also? I like aff but my life now runs on rss and email updates on stories. aff doesn't seem to have either of those features.
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July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg that was amazing and now im just hanging on to my seat waitin for wats goig to happen enxt!!!
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July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Funny chapter, the crazy doc made me laugh. Looking foreward to the next chapter. :)
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June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD that was amazing and am just about to burst through the roof with anticipation of what is going to happen next!!!
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June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story you have so far, looking forward to the next update.
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June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter I can just see the whole scene with Andrew in the apron and I cant wait to read the next chapter I am just in love with this story!