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for Shades of Gray -- Ch. 8 is up.

by exermcflyyy

person Koejii
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm.
I'm totally in love with this story.
Twins are always amazing.
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Poor Aurora, so unaware (or is she?!) of the cavorting going on between the Grays and Seth.
>3
KEEP UP THE GREAT STORY!
<3
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was thinking that I was being a bit overzelous in asking for Aurora's death just for being a chick, but now that she's trash talking my twins I'm thinking that death is still an appropriate measure. Dracula dad is way creepierthan the twins. Like his kids can have sex with each other but nobody else...WTF! And I'm loving this little predicament that the twins have created at the end of the chapter. Although, hot twincest bondage cliffies should be punishable by death.
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so the dad of course knows about his kids. (I guess getting caught in school would be a big tip-off!) So, he knows they're gonna do it no matter what, so he just keeps one bed in the room. Ok. But, what is he protecting the twins from? What is he protecting Seth (or anyone who gets close to the twins) from? Do, like the twins eventually kill or eat their fuck buddies?(No pun intended!) I don't know, are they like evil? Anyway, I'm really enjoying this story; I'm just trying to figure these two creepy kid out!
person kylee123
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The twins are so addictive! I love how close they are to each other and how good they are at driving Seth wild. I am eager to find out what makes them different from regular people. Their dad seems to be a little different too. The twins have me chuckling from the start to the end of the chapter. I can't wait to read more
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Twincest is so freaking hot. I wish Seth would get over this straight crap and move on. Who doesn't want to be molested by hot twins? And I'm sure Aurora is a sweeet girl, but I hope she gets hit by a truck or killed by the twins.
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, I am laughing hysterical now! Poor Seth can't get a break from these twins! Jeez, who would have thought they had jobs? I thought they just did each other all day long! Hahahaha What a GREAT story; so amusing! I can't wait to see what this twin has in store for poor Seth!
person DekorxAo
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I looove this story, hehe! Creepy twins are sexy! hehe.
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee~ Omg i love this, specially the way the twins totally molest poor Seth hehehehe. more please?
person Juana13
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, does seth have his work cut out for him or what...? : ) hahaha but man, the idea of hot twins hooking up with him is hot! i feel kind of bad that aurora actually might like seth, but he's too busy with the twins. wonder whats gonna happen next....
looking forward to the next chapter! hope its out soon!!!
person kylee123
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HaHa. Sweet Aurora is being sabotaged! Watching Seth trying to resist temptation is hilarious. Amelia does seem to be working to deliver him over to Casey and Cayden, If the twins have some kind of mind link with their dad, then he probably knows all the naughty stuff they have been doing to/with Seth. I love the twins. They are great.