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April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4. ROFLMAO! OMG I wonder how much of this Seth is going to be able to take. I can't help but laugh and laugh and laugh. I'm surprised I was able to squeeze this chapter before work. Maybe cause it wasn't too long? But dang, Seth is still enjoying it all even though his mind is trying to deny what his body is already accepting.
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March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I just wanted to let you know that I adore this story,
it's wonderful and I'm hoping for more..
So, I'm just encouraging you to update!
lol :)
I just wanted to let you know that I adore this story,
it's wonderful and I'm hoping for more..
So, I'm just encouraging you to update!
lol :)
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January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Happy Holidays! I hope you are doing okay. I was just reading this story again and hoping that the twins were not being too horrible to Seth. I hope we get to find out what happens soon.
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December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ah mah gawd though i couldnt exactly picture what they look like but maybe i didnt read well enough? er well anyways more please? haha im bad at uhm reviews erm...i love it, though mr.grey is not cool psh they should be allowed to keep a pet hmph! haha even if it is a living human.
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October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good news or bad news first?... Uhm, lets start with the bad ones...
I've noticed quite a few spelling mistakes, and often whole words missing from sentences, especially in the last couple of chapters.
It might be because you don't have a beta, or something, and I tend to notice stuff like that very easily because English is not my first language, and it irks me a bit.
(Meaning I learned to read English before I could speak it...)
And now for the good news.
Great story. Absolutely adore, adore, adore it!!!
The twins are especially great, you've managed to bring them to life, they are so vivid and easy to visualize that it's almost creepy. Plus they are really creepy.
Seth's complexes about being drawn to the twins work great as well, I can really believe how torn up he is about it, and how he (doesn't) handle his feelings.
I've been very excited to find out what the twins are exactly, and just my bleeping luck that it will be revealed in the NEXT chapter!!
I've been wondering the whole time, are they vampires, (too obvious with the creepy house, and Dracula look-a-like for a dad), or demons, or some sort of supernatural beings
or are they just totally cuckoo.
I will await the next chapter with bated breath, and hope the suspense won't kill me.
Keep up the good work.
I've noticed quite a few spelling mistakes, and often whole words missing from sentences, especially in the last couple of chapters.
It might be because you don't have a beta, or something, and I tend to notice stuff like that very easily because English is not my first language, and it irks me a bit.
(Meaning I learned to read English before I could speak it...)
And now for the good news.
Great story. Absolutely adore, adore, adore it!!!
The twins are especially great, you've managed to bring them to life, they are so vivid and easy to visualize that it's almost creepy. Plus they are really creepy.
Seth's complexes about being drawn to the twins work great as well, I can really believe how torn up he is about it, and how he (doesn't) handle his feelings.
I've been very excited to find out what the twins are exactly, and just my bleeping luck that it will be revealed in the NEXT chapter!!
I've been wondering the whole time, are they vampires, (too obvious with the creepy house, and Dracula look-a-like for a dad), or demons, or some sort of supernatural beings
or are they just totally cuckoo.
I will await the next chapter with bated breath, and hope the suspense won't kill me.
Keep up the good work.
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Scary chapter. Seth is in for a world of trouble now. I am DYING to read the next chapter. I just knew that this one would be a cliffie!
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I want sex with the pain too!
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And I hope Seth likes it!
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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh... I love this fic, but if things are gonna get gore I won't be reading the next chapter. See you in two chapters!! *hides behind pillow*
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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, poor Seth. He's gotten himself into a situation he can't get out of. How is he gonna escape the basement? OMG, this is horrible? Maybe Anna will save him?
Great chapter; can't say I'm looking forward to the bloody mess I assume will be the next chapter, but of course I will read it regardless! lol Especially if it has hot, bloody, torturous smex! Hahahha, Just kidding!! Really, seriously, I'm kidding; I personally HATE blood!!!!
Great chapter; can't say I'm looking forward to the bloody mess I assume will be the next chapter, but of course I will read it regardless! lol Especially if it has hot, bloody, torturous smex! Hahahha, Just kidding!! Really, seriously, I'm kidding; I personally HATE blood!!!!