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Chapter 3. Yeah, I get the feeling of desperation as well as the need to ********************. Anyways, poor Tye getting his bearings banged on by Jacq. I hope Smiths nail Tye one way or another. Now that I think about, I wonder if there will be a 3some in here with the way that things are going. Hm. The possibilities are endless and I suspect, considering that I haven't read all the chapters yet, that you'll do justice when I catch up. Either or.

Chapter 4. ROFL. Aw, Tye was helping out Smiths like a mother hen codling her chick. I wonder what Jacq had left in his messages and who it will be on the other end of the unknown number that Tye's calling. Oh the mysterious climb to the climax.

Oh boy, that Jacques prick better not show up and bother Tye! I can just see Smiths physically running his ass out of town!

Squee! That was such a hot and sensual love scene! You deserve a batch of double fudge chocolate cookies for this chapter! The scene with Smiths and Heloise racing to get to Tye was hilarious. I am glad that they finally did get to some funny business. Jacques is such a jerk, now that he suspects that Tye is seeing someone, he is probably going to show up trying to woo Tye back. I hope Smiths and Heloise will take care of him good. Awesome chapter. Smiths pouting was very cute.

I think Smiths should sent Jacques packing; that fucktard thinking that he could just waltz right back into Tye's life; what does he think??????


Anyway, good update; love Heloise!!!!

Hopefully the next one won't be so long.....(hint, hint!)


And Happy New Year!

I'm baking away! What kind of cookies do you like? Chocolate chip, macadamia nut maybe lemon flavor? Awesome chapter as usual. I have told you before but I absolutely love Smiths. He is so big and sexy and protective and hot! All at the same time. I would adopt him if I could. He is just so perfect for Tye. Anyway you can't leave us hanging. I am begging for a love scene! I know that the troublemaking Jacques will show up soon so I hope that Tye and Smiths will have some good times before that happens. Anyway thanks for the Christmas chapter. I am always so very happy to see this story. It is one of my favorites.

I will send you cookies if necessary. I love this story.

Love this story. I hope to read more soon.

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Poor Tyler, he is going to wake up scared to death lol.