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AWESOME update! I loved what you have written so keep up the great job!

Thanks for the new chapter Somnium. You know that I really love Smiths. I can just picture him tiptoeing around the living room and then letting loose the minute he was in another room. Not to mention going through the house and examining all of Tye's stuff. Life will never be boring when Smiths is around. I love his parents and the part of this chapter that made me the happiest is how accepting they are of the fact that Smiths is in love with a man. Smiths and Tye can act freely around them and that is wonderful. After all his troubles, I think that Tye really could use a loving and supportive family. Good writing. I know trouble is coming but I hope Smiths will get to pound Jacques in the end.(^-^) Until the next chapter.

chapter 6.

ho ho! now smiths knows of the pesky annoying bleep-bleeeep Jaque.... WATCH OUT YOU JACKAL! Tye's sweet ass is about to be grabbed away and you won't get to sniff him any more!!! hehehehehe~

And despite being the buff-mr.woodcutter, Tye's still tye, collapsing over work like that. So cute~ yay he still has cute-factor points despite the additional muscles this year *cheers*

and I must say, that Smith over there is bold indeed. Cuddling up to the tired brain-power-deprived Tye like that. Naughty naughty~~~ XD

onto the next chapter!

and I owe you 4 more reviews. because I was naughty and got too sugar-happy reading and reading and didn't stop to leave reviews.

so. *puppy eyes* forgive me~ *the eyes sparkle and shimer... you cannot resist!!!*

hehe~ *throws you one review coin*

and you get another one!

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btw, I hope Smith pieces the bits of information he has together quickly so he can help Tye with that Jaq issue.

and here. I think this is the last review I own you~
I hope to make it a point to try to stop after reading each chapter and review you properly like you deserve. U_U

*throws you one review coin*

pardon this poor lowly reader's insolence your honor.

chap 7

it's a date! yay~ it was a good date. really good date. thou the start of said date was not exactly ordinary~ ;)
a meal, much chatting on both sides. then a nice movie and cuddle... Wah~~~~! the ideal date! *A* *floats*

and what?! what's with the "(P.S. I think Jaques is going to appear soon. That should be fun!) "
*glares... Jaques... *click-click. gun loaded* you get ready you... you better stay in line!

hehehehehhehehe~~~

- nekoii

Awesome story dude. Love the plot but there's something missing. Your not describing their appearance well enough.