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September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You're back! I was wondering what happened to this story! But it seems it was my bad. I think I missed some chapters, so I have to go back and re-read!
Can't wait to catch up!
Can't wait to catch up!
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September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Jaques ... Jealous much?
It's quite definite he aint happy with Tye's new arrangement. Thou, so far, no one else seems to mind Smiths. So all's is good. for now~ I hope.
Do we smell conflict coming up? :D
- nekoii
It's quite definite he aint happy with Tye's new arrangement. Thou, so far, no one else seems to mind Smiths. So all's is good. for now~ I hope.
Do we smell conflict coming up? :D
- nekoii
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September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I finally caught up! And thx for the shout-out! I find myself annoyingly anal about spelling and grammar and consistency and whatnot, so don't mind me. But the edited chapter was good!
I cannot believe the audacity an brazenness (is that such a word?) of the douchebag Jacques. What an ass! He thinks Tye's just gonna drop everything and everyone to get back together with HIM, that cheating whore! That Jacques is an ass, hence the term jackass. ha
Well, I can see the ass is not going to be content with watching his ex with Smiths. I already see the wheels turning in his head, trying to figure out a way to break them up.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter; hopefully Smiths will show Jacques exactly who's boss. :)
I cannot believe the audacity an brazenness (is that such a word?) of the douchebag Jacques. What an ass! He thinks Tye's just gonna drop everything and everyone to get back together with HIM, that cheating whore! That Jacques is an ass, hence the term jackass. ha
Well, I can see the ass is not going to be content with watching his ex with Smiths. I already see the wheels turning in his head, trying to figure out a way to break them up.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter; hopefully Smiths will show Jacques exactly who's boss. :)
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September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hurray Somnium. I am so happy to see a new chapter. This is one of my favorite stories here on the site. I love Smiths so much. I also love your other story Loyalty. I can't wait to see another chapter of that one too.
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June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. I love it. Please update soon.
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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 8
the morning thing was so nice... i don't know. the idea of sitting on your front porch while sipping a hot drink and eating bread... is very appealing. i want to do that one day.
and then... AND THEN! they finally do it. O_O whoaaaaa yay~
isn't smiths such a romancer ~ aaaaawwww~~~ that's the kind of guy ya want man.
and then jacq has to call and spoil it all to shit. great.
the morning thing was so nice... i don't know. the idea of sitting on your front porch while sipping a hot drink and eating bread... is very appealing. i want to do that one day.
and then... AND THEN! they finally do it. O_O whoaaaaa yay~
isn't smiths such a romancer ~ aaaaawwww~~~ that's the kind of guy ya want man.
and then jacq has to call and spoil it all to shit. great.
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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 9
other than the short talk with jacq... it was a really quiet day.
Tye's sooo gonna get into trouble with work again. what now, he definitely cant work, with his ankle and all.
other than the short talk with jacq... it was a really quiet day.
Tye's sooo gonna get into trouble with work again. what now, he definitely cant work, with his ankle and all.
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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WAH! you dedicated chapter 10 to me!!! *beams* THANK YOU!!!! *hugs*
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Chap 10.
this was such a sweet chapter! firstly, its so surprising how Smiths can be so comfortable with Tye infront of his parents! that's so cool! so so so damn cool!
and that 'Fairy' thing, hehehhehehhehe! I get it! he's a fairy! in both natures!
okay, before i end this review...
there's a typo
"If there was a thing ot know in that town she would know it."
i think you switched the positions of 'o' and 't'. suposed to be 'to' right? instead of 'ot'
"...and Tye suddenly realized he hadn’t welcomed offered them. " what is "welcomed offered" o_O"
he hadn't welcomed them? he hadn't offered them anything to drink?
"Like sycamore among ferns. Shading and protecting, but also supported. " I love this line ^_^
"the muscle in shi chest beat a bit harder" the muscle in HIS chest. xD why am i spotting quite a number of typos? I'm sorry! I hope ya don't mind. hehehe :P
and whoa! is Tye getting possessive or what?! mine mine mine. He's mine! xD
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Chap 10.
this was such a sweet chapter! firstly, its so surprising how Smiths can be so comfortable with Tye infront of his parents! that's so cool! so so so damn cool!
and that 'Fairy' thing, hehehhehehhehe! I get it! he's a fairy! in both natures!
okay, before i end this review...
there's a typo
"If there was a thing ot know in that town she would know it."
i think you switched the positions of 'o' and 't'. suposed to be 'to' right? instead of 'ot'
"...and Tye suddenly realized he hadn’t welcomed offered them. " what is "welcomed offered" o_O"
he hadn't welcomed them? he hadn't offered them anything to drink?
"Like sycamore among ferns. Shading and protecting, but also supported. " I love this line ^_^
"the muscle in shi chest beat a bit harder" the muscle in HIS chest. xD why am i spotting quite a number of typos? I'm sorry! I hope ya don't mind. hehehe :P
and whoa! is Tye getting possessive or what?! mine mine mine. He's mine! xD
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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 11. ( OwO )
this Tyler has a bad habit of just upping and running off somewhere NOT GOOD while Smiths still sleeps!
BAD HABIT!
and off he goes to meet JACQ! oh god.... *head wall* OH GOD. Tye, are you thinking boy? are you thinking at all!?
I would have thought he'd have told Smiths of his plan. but telling smiths would mean smith boy will want to follow along when Tye goes to meet Jacq. and I don't think Tye wants that , since he's a 'big boy' and can 'take care of things himself'.
Well. I just hope he doesn't succumb to what ever grueling Jacq's definitely about to do!
*huff*
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh well... anyway. I feel a tiny bit sorry for Smiths, being so lost and all in the city. I wonder if Tye notices his discomfort? but well... Smiths is a big lug isn't he. traveled the world and all. adjusting shouldn't be a prob yeah? yeah?! xDDD
and WAH! WAH!!! i CAUGHT UP!!! you know that time, i stopped reading at chapter 7 or 8 right...
then this whole BUSY HECTIC LIFE caught up with me and threw me to the pits of sour lemons!!! *sighs* I just.... *sighs*
okay okay.
I'll see you in an update! YAY!!! now you have a follower~~~ *frowns* this is not some cult... uh.
well yeah. you have a reader follower reviewer?
do you do e-mail updates thing when you update?
if you do, can I be added on the update list? my e-mails there, i dunno, it's just there up there when ever i review, so i assume you can see it too yeah? (its on my profile to so yeah)
wokay~!!! *hugs*
see ya!
- nekoii
this Tyler has a bad habit of just upping and running off somewhere NOT GOOD while Smiths still sleeps!
BAD HABIT!
and off he goes to meet JACQ! oh god.... *head wall* OH GOD. Tye, are you thinking boy? are you thinking at all!?
I would have thought he'd have told Smiths of his plan. but telling smiths would mean smith boy will want to follow along when Tye goes to meet Jacq. and I don't think Tye wants that , since he's a 'big boy' and can 'take care of things himself'.
Well. I just hope he doesn't succumb to what ever grueling Jacq's definitely about to do!
*huff*
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh well... anyway. I feel a tiny bit sorry for Smiths, being so lost and all in the city. I wonder if Tye notices his discomfort? but well... Smiths is a big lug isn't he. traveled the world and all. adjusting shouldn't be a prob yeah? yeah?! xDDD
and WAH! WAH!!! i CAUGHT UP!!! you know that time, i stopped reading at chapter 7 or 8 right...
then this whole BUSY HECTIC LIFE caught up with me and threw me to the pits of sour lemons!!! *sighs* I just.... *sighs*
okay okay.
I'll see you in an update! YAY!!! now you have a follower~~~ *frowns* this is not some cult... uh.
well yeah. you have a reader follower reviewer?
do you do e-mail updates thing when you update?
if you do, can I be added on the update list? my e-mails there, i dunno, it's just there up there when ever i review, so i assume you can see it too yeah? (its on my profile to so yeah)
wokay~!!! *hugs*
see ya!
- nekoii
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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely new chapter Somnium. All the scenes and images are so beautiful. The lovemaking scenes between Tyler and Smiths are wonderful as well. They are so passionate for each other. Tye is definitely a part of the gay culture when he is in the city. I hope Smiths will be able to get along with the rest of Tye's friends too. I wonder what will happen if they run into Jacques. Keep up the good writing.