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Chapter 1. This is the most funniest Christmas I've ever read about. Riley's, I think I'm spelling it correctly, greeting left Anna in a daze and I can't help but feel that she's feeling more than shocked.

It's sad that Anna got kicked out of the house but having such a prick for a dad, it's understandable. I would have gotten kicked out of my parent's house way earlier if it wasn't for a specific cultural difference we have.

Chapter 2. ROFL David and Lucas really spent 2 hours in his new car? What a way to make a memory. I'm glad that Riley was able to bring Anna's mood up even though it had an odd turn towards the end. Now I'm very curious as to what Riley and David will talk about.

Chapter 3. Woah~ I didn't know that Lucas played most of the dominant part in their relationship. This goes to show how much I'm missing out. XD Other than the sex, I'm curious as to what the secret is that David's keep from Lucas. And for some reason, I'm hungry.

Chapter 4. Woo~ Lucas is definitely the dominant aggressive sex type. Poor David, I wonder how much and how many times he succumbed to Lucas' aggressive need.

Chapter 8. Woo~ Not happy with the way it ended but I'm very satisfied. I'm guessing that Anna and Lucas will get married for some reason and David will suddenly pop right back into Lucas' life and all hell breaks loose. :3

First it took me forever to log in. Then I wrote this pretty long review and it didn't take. Damn! Ok, Reader's Digest version: I'm confused. Why is David in a motel and why does Anna know this? Is she "using" Lucas for her own selfish reasons? She knows he'll never love her like that. Also, why the hell did Lucas just storm out of there w/o even hearing the whole story? Wait, did WE even hear the whole story? I could never have done that - Lucas didn't ever talk to David again? How could he be like that? Also, when did you even update this? I must have been blind, b/c I never even saw the update and I look for it every day! And also the creepy twin story; did you update that also? I better go check and start your sequel to this story. OMG, poor David and poor Lucas. I HATE angst and always want everyone to be happy.

Riley is getting to be more of an ass every time he makes an appearance. Jeez. I just want to strangle him! Lucas is getting a bit scary too! lol I'm still not sure what to think of the scene in the last chapter. I almost felt sorry for David. Well, I actually feel very sorry for David although I'm dying to know what he's hiding from Lucas. I'm still wondering what the hell Riley is trying to pull with Anna. She's a real piece of work but I still hate to see the guy messing with her for whatever reason. Thanks for the update BTW. I've been watching for it and seems like I missed it by a few days. I'll be waiting for the next chapter so see ya then.

Man, I was sure the big secret would be revealed in this chapter. Also, I'm starting to almost feel bad for Anna. Is she a magnet for unavailable gay guys or what?

Shit! How can you leave it like that???? I'm at the edge of my fucking seat!!!!! What the HELL did David do that was so bad????? Did he kill somebody?? And Lucas, too much anger already, and he doesn't even know whad David did! He's gonna react w/o thinking and that's gonna be bad; I can already tell. OMG, hurry up and update!!!!!!

Ok, I just finished ch. 2 and what does Riley mean, no one will look at each other the same again? I really, really like Riley, so I hope it's nothing bad. And kudos for David for defending, well, not defending, but kinda sticking up for Anna when he saw Riley kissing her. I loved the sled ride (or fall) down! That was hysterical!