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for Wake Up Call with Manhattan

by GreatMasterM

person Anise
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What an awesome way to start the day, these guys are just so sexy and fun :) I love that even though they're lovers they still refer to each other as dude and bro, definitely fits with them being younger guys. I also liked the powerplay between the two, things like Lucas is in the bottom position and yet he definitely doesn't seem to be giving anything up or submitting, maybe more like surrendering ;) I'm just trying to figure out what I think of the whole pit fetish, it's not disgusting but I don't think I get the appeal and yet it was really hot just how into Lucas TJ was.^^ It was a really great oneshot and I loved reading it, hopefully I see more stories from you that catch my attention ^_^
person Kuromei
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So that's who Manhattan is! XD roflmao Dude, that's rich. X3 *giggles*

A great oneshot, man. =D Humorous and hot with just the right amount of kink (or is it fetish?). ^w^ And I was wondering how you'd fit in a DBZ joke. X3 lol

Great job, Sage. ^w^
schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Sage, you're baaaaaccckkkkk!!!!!! I've missed your writing! I know, it's only been a few weeks since you finished BSC, but I HAVE missed your writing! I haven't read this yet, just was skimming thru and saw your name! Just wanted to say, yay, you're back! Ok, gonna go now so I don't say anything MORE insipid!