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More please! ^_^x

Great chapter! The only thing I can think of that would make the story complete would be to get Hector's side of the story. It would be nice to see what he is thinking about all of this. Other than that I think everything is great!

Your story is one of those I keep coming to AFF for. They are few and far between but such a joy to find. This is also one of the inexplicable cases where a brilliant story receives next to no comments. I really hope this doesn't discourage you; this reader, at least, will be sorely disappointed if you discontinue. Best wishes to you and your imagination.

Aww, Hector's sweet. Thank god Delilah called him before... ughhhhhh. That had me worried.

Glad to know my request will be taken care of sometime soon! :D

Please keep it up! I love your story! ^_^

This is a very well written story and the characters are intriguing. I can't wait for more!

I think I'm in love with your story! The characters are so real, and I can visualize everything that's happening. I loved reading the therapy session, and I, so badly, mind you, want to know so much more about Delilah (or Dee :p). Charlotte and Anthony remind me of my good friends, and that makes them even more likeable. And Mr. Hector... I'm not too sure what to think about him right now... I guess I'll tell you that later. :)

Please continue. I will be waiting. :D

Damn, I was getting worried! I knew she wouldn't get killed because it was the beginning of part two... there had to be more to it! lol. It was obvious that that wasn't going to happen... but did I really think that he could rape her or something? The thought may have crossed my mind, a lot, but it's clear to me now that Hector really is trying to help Delilah. And it seems to be working, yeah? ;)

Still I am hoping for a bit more of a background on Miss Delilah to be brought out in the open; she does seem so interesting.

Please keep going! :)

Oh no, Jenny! Thankfully Delilah is going straight to meet her. I hope everything turns out. :(

Also, I'm glad to see Delilah going to see her mother and talking after however long it's been. But I'm really surprised and kind of skeptical about how quickly she's become so... positive? It was really fast, less than 24 hours, right? But maybe that's normal? Haha, I dunno. I'm rambling now.

Btw, :D, I love how quickly you update! It's amazing!

Okay, I'm done. But don't you be! ;) Please continue.