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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story and the characters are very believable and engaging. But I just feel like the story is taking a while to really get going. You have an incredible writing style though and you should seriously consider trying to get published.
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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
amazing job!!
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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another chapter! So quickly too! Hmmm....things are definitely getting going here, that was no dream. The question is, will Hector make his move or does he consider Delilah too fragile right now? Either way, it's sure to be very interesting! Very well done!
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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! So glad to see another chapter up so quickly. I wonder how long it'll be til she starts thinking of him like that. It was a good chapter tho. Please post again soon. This is easily one of my favorite stories right now.
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September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great job! It's sooo well written and intriguing! The Hector/Delilah relationship is great too! I can't wait to read more!
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was such a great chapter! I like the way you explained Hector's behavior and showed his character's caring side while still keeping the controlling part of him in place. Poor Delilah though, I'm glad she is finally starting to open up. Anyway, good luck in school!
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm sooo glad you finally updated this story! I can't wait for more chapters to come. Please update soon!
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August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a strange man. I hope one of these days she gives him a good punch in the nose. Anyway, excellent chapter, as usual, and I'm definitely looking forward to what Hector has to say for himself in the therapy session!
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August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really want to chew him up and spit him out. He makes me angry. And he better be helping her with this or else... ;)
No matter how much I dislike him, I can't help but keep reading your story to find out what happens next. Darn you! :p
Take your time, dear, because you know we - or... me, at least! - will be here waiting for your lovely writings. Bring on the rest when you're ready. :)
No matter how much I dislike him, I can't help but keep reading your story to find out what happens next. Darn you! :p
Take your time, dear, because you know we - or... me, at least! - will be here waiting for your lovely writings. Bring on the rest when you're ready. :)
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August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Um... I kind of wanted to punch Hector in the face. And break all of his limbs. And throw him into a lake. Then pull him out and then throw him in again. But maybe that's just me? Haha.
I want to snuggle with Delilah, though. :D She's so precious.
You're welcome for everything, hon, and keep writing! You know I'm waiting.
And thank you for the review, too. :)
I want to snuggle with Delilah, though. :D She's so precious.
You're welcome for everything, hon, and keep writing! You know I'm waiting.
And thank you for the review, too. :)