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LOVE IT. It's amazing. You really get your characters and the BDSM lifestyle. It's probably the best written BDSM story I've ever read!

I'm glad Delilah is making so much progress, she is such a sweet person! I hope Hector isn't going to give her a hard time because she didn't follow all of his directions. This was a wonderful chapter! Can't wait for more!

I completely love this story! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon! :)

I am absolutely loving this story and I loved so much that you update so frequently.I wonder how he will react to Delilah not being able to do as he told her. Also I love your writing!!

It's been a while since I've perused this site (which is peculiar, considering the main 'Original Fiction' page is my homepage), but it's been a great long while since I've read something this in-depth. Your characters are well-molded and well-established, and your dialogue (both outer and inner) is splendid. This is definitely going into my favorites.

One hang-up I noticed, and this is from a technical point of view, is that I noticed one (I'm not sure if there are more, I got too into the story to see any others) capitalization of 'he' after character dialogue. I'll explain myself in an e-mail.

fantastic job! i like that is isn't all smut- their is actually a plot too!

I love this story so far. the way the characters are and the way they seem to need each other. Keep up the good work.

Wow, this keeps getting better and better. My style of writing is different from yours and I hesitate to critique too much simply because this is obviously working. There could be more detail written in, but I do remember shrieking after reading one of Robert Jordan's novels "Four hundred and thirty pages for one LOUSY DAY!" So if this is what you like, definately keep at it :) I can't wait to see what comes next!

I know this is a pointless, dumb review but all I can think to say is:

More, dear, more! :D

I am enthralled. I thought that this would be badly written, which is not to defame you. I am pleasantly surprised. I really enjoy reading this, it's thrilling. Hector scares me, but that is why I keep coming back. Please continue to write knowing that you have another fan.