rate_review Reviews

I feel bad because at the moment I can not think of any helpful criticism.... and I must fall back on the "oh my god I love this story" but really the characters are enjoyable... and its both a nicely told story and fantasy.... I look forward to more.

girl, this is sooooo amazing!

I absolutely love this story. I liked it so much that when I realized that I had just finished your last chapter that i went grrrr. I will be looking forward to your next update.

AMAZING.

Oh my God! This story is amazing! I Really Realy Realy Love it! Your descriptions of the emotions are so amazing. I Love how u slowly grew the relationship between Hector and Delilah. U didnt rush into the sex which makes this story so refreshing intense and original. Please Please Please Please Please Please Please update soon! Like now maybe? I cant wait to read more. Im totally hooked! Please update. I dont care if it had some grammar error. The way u write is utterly thrilling and amazing.

Yay! Wow...that was...awesome in my opinion. I'm glad to see that she hasn't rejected him. I really hope he has more sly things happen in the future. I enjoy how well thought out everything he does is, it's a nice contrast to Dee. Please update soon I am anxious to see what the rest of the day brings.

This is such a twisted story haha, but! I love it so very much.
So psychologically deep and intense...it's really good.
Can't wait to see what happens now that she has accepted him as her "master".

Definitely addicting!

Definitely addicting!

Wow, great story so far! I love the domination genre, and to see it portrayed with multifaceted characters in a semi-believable situation was extremely refreshing. (I say only semi-believable b/c there are strict boundaries for practicing psychiatrists, and I don't imagine that staging a kidnapping and near-death circumstances qualifies as a viable scenario, lol. But with that aside, the way the characters interact and Delilah's dependent personality seem to make her reactions and feelings toward him plausible.) I especially love how Hector is a domineering male, but is still caring while Delilah (aaah, love this name!) can be highly dependent, but also extremely willful. And finally, the way the characters change over time and show new sides of themselves, especially Delilah who is finally changing from a recluse to a feisty lady, brings another dimension to this promising story.
I agree with another review tho, in that the story could be slightly more detailed. This isn't a big point tho, and I definitely like the style you've been using thus far. :)

Overall, I love what you've written so far and eagerly await your next update!