rate_review Reviews

I don't feel comfortable reading Jin's POV, although i like it, it chills me.

This story is outrageous. As to your question about Jin...I don't hate him. I don't know that I love him, but I definately don't hate him.

I read this story late last night and thought about it all day today. Jin is a fascinating character - cute and dangerous at the same time. Is it just me or is Quinn going insane. He seems worried but almost obsessed considering that Connor has been with Jin unharmed so far. Very good story. I can't wait to read the next chapte I am also wondering what kind of creature Jin is.

I still like Jin :) It's not his fault he's a strange-water-creature ^_^ And at least he actually likes Connor :) Plus, I feel sorry for him, what with being taken away from his home and having unpleasant things done to him :( I think William's pretty evil though, doing an experiment on his son, and trading that girl. I don't really like Lila all that much either, but hopefully her and Quinn won't do anything too horrible to Jin... I like Quinn :) He's protective of his older brother and it's really sweet ^_^ Anyway! Can't wait for the next chapter :D Please keep up the great work! ^_^

I like Jin, and I hope he stays with Connor. It seems that he doesn't have any cruel intentions towards Connor, I hope he can somehow tell Quin that. But I look forward to more. Will there be more action between the two, and what does Quinn plan to do? and what about their father? what is he really up to?
can't wait to find out more! looking forward to it!!!

He he, this seems really interesting! ^_^ I liked your description of the boy :) Poor Connor, he must be so confused, ha ha. I'm looking forwards to reading more! :D

Ack, noo, that last bit was so suspensful! XD I wanna know what Jin is even more now... And yay, he has a name! ^_^ I like how he can't keep his hands off of Connor, ha ha. Sucks about the nightmares and stuff though :( Thank you for updating so quickly! ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter XD Please keep up the good work!

Oh my God, Quinn's making Jin sound really creppy now!! >.< What is he!? He seems so cute and adorable, doing buttons wrong and stuff... And it's cute how excitable he is ^_^ (excitable as in finding the maze and fruit and stuff interesting, not excitable is in molesting Connor, ha ha) Thank you thank you thank you for updating so quickly again! ^_^ Please keep up the fantastic work! :D

Shit, I just did a lengthy review and it didn't take. Ok, Reader's Digest version: I love this story; I'm so curious as to what Jin is and why he is dangerous to Connor. Can't wait for the update! Also, I clicked on your name b/c it sounded familiar, and now I know why! You write the Lucas story - also a great, great story! Keep up the good work1

dang, I love how adorable Jin and Connor are together, but quinn says that something is wrong with Jin. wonder why... what sort of creature is he? and what is so dangerous about him? despite the fact that he is really cold, and that he makes water turn to icy cold.... and why would he eat connor?
so many questions. I hope they're answered soon. and i really hope you get connor's girlfriend (soon to be ex...??) out of the way. she's just annoying.
can't wait for the next update, which I really hope is up soon. so looking forward to it!! i love this and it's an absolutely great story. I'd hate to see it discontinued.