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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope Connor (and Quinn) will be ok!
Thank you for updating so often.
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Thank you for updating so often.
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that is pretty suspensful! >.< I don't want Quinn to die!! :( He seemed so nice... And he was only doing what he thought was best for his brother :( I hope he's going to be okay... The same with Jin and Connor. Diving into a frozen lake can't be healthy, ha ha. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D Please keep up the good work ^_^
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG,the last two chapters are completely riveting! I'm at the edge of my seat! Poor Quinn, trying to save his brother and he gets attacked. When Jin ripped his cheek, he must have transmitted some kind of poison, I'm thinking. Is Quinn gonna be ok? Is Connor gonna be ok? He's gonna freeze in the lake. And what did Jin change into? And what in the world is his father into? This is such an excellent story! I can't wait to read more!
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh the suspense! Does Jin have venom in his claws to poison Quinn so badly. I hope Quinn will be able to survive this even though he was planning to kill Jin. I am eager to read the next chapter. I hope Connor and Jin are reunited.
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
darn cliffhanger... hope you update soon! what's happening to jin? will connor be able to save him in time??
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooh i look forward to that!! i probably might pick the happiest ending though *shrugs*
too bad its near the end already...but looking forward to it all the same!!
too bad its near the end already...but looking forward to it all the same!!
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very creative idea. I already vote for the happy ending with loads of sex. ( one track mind) My only question is if you plan a sequel to Coming of Age because the story seems to have a lot of potential, with Jin's mysterious character and Connor's evil family background. I would love to know if Connor's father has any more mysterious creatures that he has been experimenting on. Anyway, I look forward to reading the alternative endings to this story. Keep up the good writing.
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
no!!!!! they can't kill him!!! whats so bad about jin? is it just because of how he looks? i really hope connor finds him and saves him before lila or his brother gets to him. and maybe jin find a way to be able to communicate with connor.
can't wait for the next chapter!! I loved this story!!! its so intense and suspenseful, i really do look forward to the next chapter. hope it up soon!!! : )
can't wait for the next chapter!! I loved this story!!! its so intense and suspenseful, i really do look forward to the next chapter. hope it up soon!!! : )
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first five chapters. I like it, your story is very interesting.
I don't hate Jin, I actually like him. If I hate somebody it's Connor's father. I understund why Quinn doesn't trust Jin but I hope nothing happens to Jin. I hope he and Connor can be together. Just wondering how Connor will react when he finds out.
I'm very curious to know what will happen.
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I don't hate Jin, I actually like him. If I hate somebody it's Connor's father. I understund why Quinn doesn't trust Jin but I hope nothing happens to Jin. I hope he and Connor can be together. Just wondering how Connor will react when he finds out.
I'm very curious to know what will happen.
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, Jin certainly doesn't seem that innocent now! I am confused by him; not sure what he's there for. Is he there to hurt Connor? Well, soon Quinn and Lila will find out what he's there for and try to help Connor. But since Jin is slowly sensing trouble/danger, they better watch out! Looking forward to the next chapter!