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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I hope you are doing okay. I was just thinking about this story today and hoping that you would post your other alternate endings. I still want the happy ending. Anyway if you are under stress you should take care of yourself first and come back to this when you are feeling better. This is my second favorite story. The Gray twins are my favorite for sure. I am off to review them now.
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August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ending number two is more angsty to me than ending number one. I think ending number two provides more explanation but still leaves a bit of a mystery about Jin. Ending number two is equally heartbreaking to me. I liked the fact that Connor thought Jin was beautiful when he saw him in his changed state.
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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like your unhappy ending. I am glad you are doing four because this ending would break my heart. Especially after your description of Jin and the beautiful creature he has changed into. Good job. I am looking forward to your other endings
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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so this ending is better. So, since Conner jumped in the water, does that mean the stone he's holding (Jin) can be reborn? Or become alive again? Interesting chapter, looking forward to the next two!
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August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was so sad. I'm still crying. I can't blame Lila, how can someone go on after witnessing something so horrific and blaming herself the whole time. I'm glad you did this ending first, I want to read about HAPPY endings! lol But seriously, very well written. So, so sad and tragic.
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCKING CRAP! I've never read anything like this before. O__O And it's great! XD
The hopeless romantic in me hopes for a happy ending but with Quinn going south, Connor losing his mind and Jin's change, I'm not sure if that would be appropriate. Oh, yeah, and their dad had turned out to be a royal jerk, to put it very mildly.
I'm staying tuned to this. It's just so unique I can't help but wriggle in anticipation of an update. ^w^
The hopeless romantic in me hopes for a happy ending but with Quinn going south, Connor losing his mind and Jin's change, I'm not sure if that would be appropriate. Oh, yeah, and their dad had turned out to be a royal jerk, to put it very mildly.
I'm staying tuned to this. It's just so unique I can't help but wriggle in anticipation of an update. ^w^
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, since I hate angst; I'll go for the mega-happy ending. I will read all the endings, tho! I LOVE this story and actually DON'T want it too end; it seems you just started it!
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. Very exciting chapter. Loved the sexy smex scene and the dream that Connor had. I wonder about the changes that are happening to Jin. I do love him. I hope Connor will be able to find him soon. Maybe Quinn and Lila will come around and help them out. Maybe not. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, no, I don't want them to kill Jin! :( I mean, it's very bad that he attacked Quinn and all, but... But he really does seem to like Connor! :( Were the changes in Jin due to him and Connor having sex? That's a pretty interesting reaction, ha ha! ^_^ Looking forwards to the next chapter, as always! Please keep up the good work :D
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is fuck up ....
But I can't get enough of it
Please up date soon =D
But I can't get enough of it
Please up date soon =D