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for Cider: Book Six of LEVS - ON HIATUS

by kiix

person kisekix3
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHY MUST IT END SOOO!!!
sooo glad your back i have been a paitent little reader/reviewer!
SO SHOULDN'T I GET SOMETHING MORE!
not to say im not happy
i am SOO happy! when i relized you had come out of your little hidey hole i like stared at my screen for five minutes gigglng!
total honesty right there!
creeped myself out a little!
anywho! glad to hear about cake!
the first ime you announced you were getting it published i was like "woo!"
then like"wth? how long has it been! were is it!"
then you didn't go with yaoi house
and i was like "awwwww...."
but now its soo close i can taste it lol
i made a cake funny!
but anyway i probably already wrote to much and your proably like "wow stalker!"
so ill go but
MUCH LOVE AND KUDOS!!!!
-always loyal
Kiseki_x3
person anhiya
schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
VAMPIRE SAGA IS BACK! *yippie! I can't still comment much cause the main plot is not there yet. Except short sentences about whereabout of Marcus and X condition (i'm expecting their angst would be covered more later though...) I mean...when Sex extremely depressed ... he got several chapter on it with everybody's helping. And now on X turn, it only mentioned in 1 one sentence and Sex said he'll be there when X need it. It's like...everybody havin fun and let X drown in his sorrow.

Anyway..i know it won't be interesting to have similar angsty scene like Sex did... but of course u always managed to surprise me. SO i'll just wait :D

Personally i didn't expected the story turn to celebrity thingie...o_O Thinking back the whole series is quite drastic indeed. It seems like before is only vampire and human world, and now to the entire universe...it seems. I mean in positive way(although sometime kinda lost and forgot who's who's children).

And i dunno if u've heard of Mirage of Blaze - Honoo no Mirage...this celebrity thingie remind me of one scene where Oda nobunaga reincarnated as rockstar singer (and conquered world with his single song..i think)..ngg. hope not become that cheesy...

As always ..good work. I hope this 2 chapter and that envelope got something related to the main plot.


Ri
person NessaC
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1 Russian Caviar: I really like the way this starts, although I think it would help if you distinguish a little more the background info on PVD's tour and the present. I got a little confused trying to sort out what had already happened, and what was happening. I like that Claudius & Sex didn't have sex right away, it's a bit too early, but that scene is a nice teaser for what's to come.

PS. I like the mention of pole dancing in the prologue - any more of that to come? I joined the pole dancing club at uni this year, and it's so much fun, I can totally see Sex's gyrating shooting up with a pole.. and Claudius tied up and watching?

Congrats on getting Cake published so soon - do you know what stores it'll be available at?

~Spiritxx
person lone_child
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thankies for the new chapter~~~ *pout* no smut T___T
person Ashe
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Everytime I read 'Pack Von D' it reminds me of Kat Von D off of LA Ink. I love that show and her. Anyway, I loved the chapter, I love all your stories. Just a few spelling errors that need correcting and it'll be perfect. I hope publishing is going well and please update soon!
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GAH! You don't know how supremely happy I am to be reading this series again! I got a little behind. Didn't even realize there was a 6th book! FTW? But, I am back to it, and I am super excited! This is my shit! I love you, and this series. I am a definate groupie for this story!
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay!! you're back! ^^ great as always! Can't wait for the next chapter. :3
person mashael
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! iLove those couple~
person VES
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw no D: You can't make this the last installment, I love this series too much!

This is an interesting starter to the new book. I like it, but the beginning was kind of hard to read and I got lost a few times; of course part of that was that it's been a while since I read the last book and so I didn't really remember who everyone was.
I do like it though.

...Just don't make this the last installment. D: Augh.
person Laur
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Cider rocks!

Poor X how are Az and Skell doing though? The Imperials are not with Sex/Eddie? That is a little weird.

The crowd chanting Dead had me laughing as did the lycan balls part in the song.

Update when you can!