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hey its bin a loooong time since the last time i have reviewed any of your wonder series but i just did really have anything to say but i just had a couple of questions. 1 what happened to the dragon. i remember u saying something about it sleeping most of the day or something like that. but will she pop up any more in the story or what. just wondering. and 2 an what about Raissa an her being preggers. cause you said something in the first chap that caught my attentionabout claudia not wanting to be a "grandmother before her children shook of the title of fledgling" so wouldn't it be too late now that on of her daughters is preggers now. oh an if the first question was asked by someone else sorry just slap me over the head an tell where the answer is an ill figure it out from there.

oh an i almost forgot please up sate soon your killing me here. as always your stories are the fucking best.

New character.hmmm...why i'm thinking that Skell would "destroy" the world because of Lanseng. But i hope more than just that :).
Eager for more,good job as usual.

Ri

yaaayy
okay, POOR lannnnyyyy But he ignored the collective once he shall do it again. But i have a feeling for the sake of drama he will return back if he believes he is causing hindrances... !

on another note...
So, when Orillia said that they were all collective and feeding off of one another, that means that the way lanny looks is not actually how he looks, its what "they" wanted him to look like?

like a shell around the soul type thing?

woooooooow!
now thats a whole lot to think of!
i cant beileve u work there it seems really scary!

Oh I'm really getting into the story now. I was a little "eh" with the first couple of chapters, but now the issues are starting and its fun.
I hope you don't make Lanseng leave though, or at least leave and be unable to come back [though itd be interesting if he left and the collective sent someone else in his body].

I'm really looking forward to more chapter. :)

Oh no! I hope the blueberry one doesn't have to go away! He's one of my favorite characters... Come on brotherhood, you can figure out a way to keep him. Orillia was a snarky one. My favorite line, "Lanseng was sent to your House to be a part of your inner circle. Not to have his inner circle parted." That's genius right there.

By the way, my captcha says "tations pucker"...

that's just crazy!! i hope lansang? (i think that's how it's spelled) doesn't go!!! it would be sad :( i want Morose!!! can't wait to read more!

Aww yes, Cider! Another wonderful chapter that is pulling me deeper into this world and I don't want it to stop. Great chapter!

Interesting. I take Sasha's point though, despite the Collective being one, who's to say there aren't factions and individualities within it as well? Also interesting they didn't predict the Brothers, since you would think that's a major event. Perhaps the Collective isn't so all-seeing and all-predicting as they would like to be. They have misstepped before, when they thought Azrael was Hashmalliam. Food for thought!

Hope you don't freeze out in the woods :)

~Spiritxx