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schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice first chapter! Interesting plot so far Lucas is adorable and i have a suspicion that Anna gonna turn out being a bitch (just abandoning Lucas like that how mean >:[).. lol. Keep up the good work and update soon :]
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GREAT story so far! Anna does seem like a bitch! She just abandoned Lucas when Lucas sort of went out of his way to walk home w/her. Looking forward to the update!
person Miliana
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it already! Can't wait for the next chapter. =)
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As a freakishly tall amazon myself, I enjoy this character. I'm diggin the story too.
person vicxn
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh i likee!! Update soon plz xx
person kylee123
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just finished chapter one. Love it! Moving on to chapter two.
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lucas is totally clueless, although I can totally understand why. You can't get shit on your entire life and then fathom that someone else not only likes you but might be a little bit like you. And what is with throwing up after wet dreams. Poor Lucas.
person kylee123
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is very good. I love Lucas and David. Too bad Lucas's dad had to show up. I do wonder what is up with Anna. I like her but she definitely is on the taking side of the relationship with Lucas. I feel like she may be somewhat insecure but she should be a better friend to Lucas.

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